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for Our Love Story

by IGGY

person Gwynhafra
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting. Both Jasmine and Lily are names of flowers. She must be a real beauty when she grows up then. Hope to see the next update soon. ^^
person BojoQuarko
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww that is so cute! I love the name and the fact that they chose 'Potter' for the last name and didn't fight about it. I just can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awsome writeing!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH I can't wait for chapter 17!
person greenwizard
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story! Please finish it soon! As a fellow author I know reviews are few and far between so here is one just for you cuz you deserve it. I usually don't read 16 chapters in a row but I couldn't stop. Please keep up the good work. Do I get a cookie now?? lol
person slymom
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful!!! The love they have for eachother and the baby is very sweet. Please update soon.

Thanks.
person brittany
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i just started reading this story...it's wonderful!!!
Aww Jasmine Lily Potter, thats the sweetest name ever!!!
please update soon!!!
person Amessis
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet!
person cottoncandy
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter! Give me more!!!
person jay
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing 15th chapter!! PLEASE REVIEW SOON!!!
person DarkRemembrence
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this story...!! When will you next update b/c it's been a little over a month....? Oh.... I wanna know what happens next...!! *whinez*

~Dark~