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for Mistake of the Century

by Edelweiss

person CCCMistiq
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is the best thing I\'ve read in months. :) I can\'t wait until there\'s another chapter. I\'m not going to ask anything about what\'s going to happen (I love surprises), I just hope you have time to write a lot more. That and I hope you get more reviews...Looking at how many hits your story has received, you would think more people would take a minute and review for you. Especially for a great story like this one.
person Narcissa Black
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry , but Charlie and Bill deserve more time with her than that. Not that I don\'t like the twins, but FOUR might be a lot for her to handle. According to your rules, I am hoping for another chapter soon.
person Pastel
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I can\'t wait to see what happens with Charlie, Bill and Hermione. Does each male only gets attracted to her up until they shagged her? Ron and Harry don\'t seem to lust after her anymore.
person Slave4Severus
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh you bad bad bad author you!!!! YOU STOPPED WHEN THE FOURTH POTATO WAS GETTING GOOD!!! All nice and crispy just the way I like it. I hope by the twelth potato you will have Sev make an appearance. LOL
Thanks for liking my penname...I write on FF.net if you wanna take a peak...now..on with the fifth potato that is turning quickly into the ninth. LOL I think all the carbs are getting to me...do I look fat???
person Slave4Severus
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHERE IS THE FOURTH POTATO???? LOL Good job on these chapters. I am VERY intrigued as to who sent her that little, handy potion....hmm...a slytherin perhaps? I hope I am number five and you will post already. LOL
person Miari
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! Who sent her that potion? Snape? ( I\'m primarily a SS/HG shipper) Any chance you might make the Arthur incident I feel coming up a trio w/ Molly so he wouldn\'t be \"cheating\"?
person Petalsoft
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I\'m guessing that once they\'ve had her once that the attraction wears off or something? I\'m really looking forward to the red head fun next time. Bring it on!
person CCCMistiq
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is the first one I\'ve reviewed here (although I\'ve read a lot of the things posted here)... I\'m not sure what to say except that I really like this one and hope you continue posting chapters. I didn\'t notice any huge errors or anything like that and I think the story is going great. I can\'t wait to read another chapter!
person Petalsoft
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fun Chapter! Love how irresistable she is. Can\'t wait until she gets back to school. Or maybe the Weasley brothers will all come home for a visit? LOL
person Veela_girl
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good start. I can\'t wait to find out what kind of potion that was and who sent it. Did the trio use silencing charms, I just don\'t see Molly not investigating all the commotion.