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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It\'s great that Fred and George are branching out into the sex toys business! LOL That made me smile. Very sexy!!!!!!!!!!!! It\'s a wonder that they didn\'t try to have sex with her however. Four guys and no humping? But I think you mentioned something about saving her for someone special. Can\'t wait to read more.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending, it\'s good so far, I\'m just hoping that after that last little adventure that Hermione will warm up a bit to the idea that she might be attractive. Although I don\'t like much that you describe her as plain and boring before the potion and that after they\'ve had their fill they go back to thinking of her like that. Especially hearing that from Harry and Ron, their her best friends, they should think better of her than that, after sharing what they did I\'d expect them to have even just a little bit more respect for her. I did love the scene with the twins and Bill and Charlie, they were more mature and Hermione became much more couragous and confident. I\'m curious as to who sent the potion, Draco perhaps? Btw, where\'s Ginny during all this? You mention Hermione staying in her room, but Ginny herself is never there. Anyway, am looking forward to the next chapter.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a most excolent story but you relly need to start puting it out a little faster becuse the anticpation is just killing me. let me take a guss that she will lose her virginaty to dumbldore. so once agan pleas hurry cus i want to hear more about hermonie fucking evory one in site!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even though it looks like you have plenty more than five reviewers, HERE\'S MY REVIEW!!! Now the next chappie had better be nice and smutty, you hear??!! *glare of death at evil author who cliffied just before awesome Weasley sex scene*
-jo
-jo
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
Wonderful story. I can hardly wait for more... ;) Not only is it written quite well but the smut part is great too. *grin*. Though I wish there where many more chapters to read right now as it really is hard to wait for it.
No actual intercourse for Hermione? Poor girl. Then again it isn\'t her doing. Maybe she will be having the ultimate fun in the end, once she can decide for herself.
I wouldn\'t be surprised if Snape made that portion. After all he\'s the master of that craft. I was impressed that the portion works for each guy once (only) but for Hermione every time she consumes alcohol and meets a new guy (or more).
Please hurry and feel free to add me to your mail list and write me.
Bye
Oliver
Wonderful story. I can hardly wait for more... ;) Not only is it written quite well but the smut part is great too. *grin*. Though I wish there where many more chapters to read right now as it really is hard to wait for it.
No actual intercourse for Hermione? Poor girl. Then again it isn\'t her doing. Maybe she will be having the ultimate fun in the end, once she can decide for herself.
I wouldn\'t be surprised if Snape made that portion. After all he\'s the master of that craft. I was impressed that the portion works for each guy once (only) but for Hermione every time she consumes alcohol and meets a new guy (or more).
Please hurry and feel free to add me to your mail list and write me.
Bye
Oliver
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh update please I love this story
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so gonna be a good no make that great fic. I see laughs galore and yummy sex scenes in the future. Keep writing.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure who Drai is, but it was clearly an oversight omitting Draco from the list. You can cheat a little, right? Pretty, pretty, please?
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait for you to update this fic. I\'ve been reading Inell a lot lately, and she\'s on a huge Bill and Charlie kick. So incredibly hot. Fred and George too, yum.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely LOVING this fic! The plot\'s got me on the edge of my seat. I WANT TO KNOW WHO SENT THE POTION!!! lol
The only thing I have a problem with is the formatting. I dunno if that\'s because of uploading it onto aff.net or not, but multiple people seem to have dialogue in the same paragraph. It might be easier to discern who\'s speaking if you split it into separate paragraphs. Like I said, I don\'t know if the formatting gets screwed up when you upload it or not.
But that\'s the only complaint I have! I LOVE this story!!!
-Kelly
The only thing I have a problem with is the formatting. I dunno if that\'s because of uploading it onto aff.net or not, but multiple people seem to have dialogue in the same paragraph. It might be easier to discern who\'s speaking if you split it into separate paragraphs. Like I said, I don\'t know if the formatting gets screwed up when you upload it or not.
But that\'s the only complaint I have! I LOVE this story!!!
-Kelly