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by Locke

person Aisling
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Schizo, lol! :P luved the update, oooh great lie :D cya huni more soon xxx
person RebaWilliams
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NNNOooooooooo! You can\'t effing leave it there! *grumbles* OK, so you can... it\'s you\'re story after all... but I don\'t have to like it... I mean the cliffe not the story... now that I LOVE!

Update soon!

~Reba
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE LET THEM SWITCH EVERYONCE IN A WHILE
BOTH DRAC AND HARRY CAN BE DOM/SUB
IT\'D BE REALLY YUMMY
UPDATE SOON
person Aisling
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry im a chapter late, my step-dad went skitso and refused to let me on the comp :( :( But, in relation to the previous chapter... i like Voldes house!!! can we see soime floating pink marshmellows?? :S :S *pouts* hehehe and no.. id rather not fuck him sorry!! :P we\'ll leave that to Bellatrix :P ;)

as for this chapter... yay!! hehehehe Siri\'s back yay!! LOL and Bumblefuck is gone!! cya more soon xxx
person Colton
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Locke, Hott shit!....a bit confusing at times...but nice story.....<3 See you soon bitch.
person sbkar
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7 review: I like the synchronicity of Draco and Harry as they confronted Dumbledore!!!!
Wheee!!! And, our sweet Io has found someone special, with greasy hair and potion-stained
fingers; aw, good for both of them!!!

Now, the questions:
1) How messed up is Sirius?
2) Are we getting one step closer to freeing the Ethereals?
3) Horrid thought: Umbridge in a bikini, giving Moldy Voldie a lap dance!?!?!?!? Yech!
4) Has Percy been snooping around the school yet? You know, a little Death Eater infiltration?
5) Just how sychronous are Draco and Harry? There are boundless possiblities to test and refine this!!!
person tessa3
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet mutha of god!!!! *claps hands* first and foremost let\'s start with the Fuck you comments *does air guitar* that was genius right there... yes it was.. laughed my ass of.. and then its SIRIUS RRock on... but you know what????? i wasn\'t exoecting that... i mean there are little hints in other sdtories about sirius comin g back but this one didn\'t have any.. too coolers... and last but not least... Luc... i swear if someone\'s dungeons have more toys he loves it there.. do you know how many times i had to restock his dungeon and then he leaves???? *glares at the sleeping Luc* i swear... oh yeah... More penguins, with toasters and stun guns *giggles*
person Demon
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good and can\'t wait for the next chapter
person Loki
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Is sulking* I wanted Dumbly dead...or at least seriously maimed. Absolutely love the Jealous!Draco though, wanna see lots more of him please! And as for the fire - the more the better!

~Loki
person tessa3
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wavaes* sorry im late *huffs* had to work late and then go to school *sighs* anyhoo... me like this fic very much..but the penguins are Evil *shudders* are they the penguins that has the tuff of red hairon their head *sudders* them be some evil critters *cackles evilly* *coughs* sorry... its just funny that their are evil red hair tuff penguins running around Voldies throne room.. yes i gave them the tuff of red hair ^__^