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by Locke

person tessa3
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* oh well what the hell?? *flops onto beanbag* Colin and Lucius *chokes on laughter* I Never saw that coming?? *starts laughing* oh gods did u see his face *snickers* that was GREAT!!! *coughs* um yeah.. lol... keep on wroting this is awesome.. andi will definetly keep reading.. OH WAIT A MOMENT!!!! Will Io be okay?? noe of his wounds are healing,,, i hope so its to soon for our your (old) Ethereal (sp?) to pass away to Vahalla *coughs* lord i meant the wild blue yonder *shakes head, walks away from computer muttering about reading to many books on Norse*
person Narcissa Black
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s right, thanks for reminding me, exactly when are you going to have a little lemon pie with Draco and Harry? Canon Sirius does it every time, I don\'t think I\'ve ever read a more flattering physical description of a man than JK\'s Sirius Black. BTW, two reviews of a story I have posted here have advocated the placement of my children in a cage so that I will produce chapters more quickly. Not getting much done now that the summer holidays are here and my children are home. I don\'t believe that I mentioned a cage in regards to your friends...
person Lady X
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why...can\'t he remember anything??? Why is Ethan a bastard to Io when they used to date? I feel as if Ethan is partly the reason for Io being with Fudge. hey i got a question..i have been assuming that Io is pronounced eye-oh but is that right or is iy more like e-oh? I am bad with japanese names and stuff liek that that is why i ask and i just realized hey wait a minuet is that really how it is pronounced or what? so really great chapter. can\'t wait for more.
person tessa3
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* oooooooooo this is too good *nodding* yep yep... HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY (if you are in the states) and if uare located in a different country ignore that prudent message!!!! *snorts* anyhoo.... awesome.. love Io and Sev... getting interesting .. yep yep.. can\'t wait to see what is going o n with Harry.. and Awesome slap by Mrs. Weasley *hands her A Perfect Bitch Slap Trophy* congratulations Mrs. Weasley job well down *giggles*
person Loki
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The slash is good, get to it sooner ^_~. I also wanna see Harry wreck bloody vengence on everyone and everything. Draco can help. *Puppy eyes* Could you do that for me? Pwease? And more fire.
Eager for more as ever,

~Loki
person sbkar
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Eleven review:

who jumped within the way ... who jumped in the way

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Plot twists galore! Will Snape be able to fend off Dolores and her boy-toy, Percy?
person sbkar
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Twelve review:
Are there any other Ethereals that would be of help to the Light?
Harry\'s magic lanced through the house, but, did it impact somewhere else?
Where is Lucius now? Who is helping him as he grieves?
Since the collar dissolved, will Io be healable (may not even be a word! LOL) by magic?
Why can\'t Percy understand them -- was he knocked too hard?

I\'m thinking someone should be performing bonding rituals left and right, to help harness and focus all the magic that will be floating around. Basically, I have to wonder why Draco was glowing...

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she casted the spell ... Cast is one of those special verbs; the third-person form is still \"cast\".

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nothing phased him ... that\'s \"fazed\"

Definitions of fazed on the Web:

* bothered: caused to show discomposure; \"refused to be fazed by the objections\"
www.cogsci.princeton.edu/cgi-bin/webwn2.1

Definitions of phase on the Web:

* (physical chemistry) a distinct state of matter in a system; matter that is identical in chemical composition and physical state and separated from other material by the phase boundary; \"the reaction occurs in the liquid phase of the system\"
* any distinct time period in a sequence of events; \"we are in a transitional stage in which many former ideas must be revised or rejected\"
* arrange in phases or stages; \"phase a withdrawal\"
* a particular point in the time of a cycle; measured from some arbitrary zero and expressed as an angle
* (astronomy) the particular appearance of a body\'s state of illumination (especially one of the recurring shapes of the part of Earth\'s moon that is illuminated by the sun); \"the full phase of the moon\"
* adjust so as to be in a synchronized condition; \"he phased the intake with the output of the machine\"
www.cogsci.princeton.edu/cgi-bin/webwn2.1

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dyed out completely ... unless you\'re changing someone\'s hair color, it\'s \"died\"

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person Aisling
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh goody L/H L/H/D :P LOL yumy!! better one L/D/H/A :P im sure i can take them :D :D LOL

more soon huni poor Io :\'( bad Ethan and Tate!!! really bad... haha take that Percy!
person Narcissa Black
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe you killed me off. Draco will obviously be in mourning for me for some time. Lucius never deserved me, which is clearly why I divorced his sorry ass and took my name back. I have faith in Severus that he will be able to heal Io. Umbridge is dead. The munchkins do the happy dance. You need to tell your friends that you have important writing to do. We\'re waiting.
person moopie
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wouldn\'t sirius have been able to smell the difference between the real ron and hermione? Or was it ... i dunno...