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by Locke

person tessa3
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet mother of merlin... DAMN COLIN
person sbkar
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Colin...that was a masterful stroke making him an assassin...
person Aisling
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! poor Colin!!! Ok, i have no idea LOL if it wasnt for me imagining things i could have gessed right!! :( LOL :P more soon cya xxx
person Narcissa Black
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, of all the people in Gryffindor, I bet Colin would make an excellent assasin. Good Job. I need to go to bed if I\'m handing out praise like you\'re five years old. LOL
person sharon
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re use of crude swear words have truly lost their surprise. The reason that you don\'t update means little to me only that you do. You taking my opinion and making it personal by being defensive of the overused authors notes is really a waste of time. The fact of the matter is that too much personal information on many of the stories is a waste of time because if we skipped them the story would still happen, try it, just read a few stories and don\'t read the a/ns and see if it really makes a bit of difference. The only time that I find myself looking for the a/s are when something goes really wrong and I find that I am looking for a logical explanation and usually the author will give me that heads up that I need for things to flow once again. I also find that when the author remarks seldom that I always take the time to check it out because I know that it must really be important. No need to be pricky or to take this opinion as personal, its just really a strenghtening of the word that makes me know that I can really respect the authors notes because they become used for really important comments that will not waste either of our time.
person Narcissa Black
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry and Draco are getting in a bit over their heads, yes? Lucius and Severus need to use their experience to keep them channeled. Can Bella survive the 4 of them using Reucto on her? Is now a good time to tell you that I am obsessed with your story? Have a good night.
person fraser
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please?
person Aisling
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOl if Lucius is on there as well, i\'ll take the camera forcfully :P LOL ;) ayhow.. Bellatrix? no she\'s dead...mmm... i dont know! Id say Narcissa but she\'s dead too and a good guy LOL :P mmm... i cant think of anyone.... :S o well. i can not know today.. (just this once :P) cya huni more soon xxx
person RissSta
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes thank you! (but i am now hooked and need my fix, so hurry up...no pressure though)
person tessa3
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Blinks* goodness.... ya know i was sittin here reading and reading and nodding and commenting when a thought hit me...How in the HELL did Colin get to Hogwarts and its suppose to be summer vacation?? then i kept on reading and you gave an answer to my question... *snorts* damn never crossed my mind until now that colin was in th epicture out of no where *snorts* oh yeah.. and colin using dark curses *blinks* scary ne?.... hmm what else *taps brain* is Io going to regain his memories or will he stay like that forever blocking the horrifying years of his life.. and what is up with Big BRO.. Ethan is it?? He\'s a twisted Ethereal..really reallly twisted.. *sighs* i wonder what of Har\'s magic? *sighs* so many questions so little time.. anyhoo...Love the chappie until next time toodlles