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for Short Fuse

by Locke

person fragonknight01
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome scene there with Voldie...I lay odds you caught us all gapping with that one! So do I need to go read a different story to get the penguin scoop?
person tessa3
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waves* just got off work... its been a long time...lol... okay... okay.. on with the review... HOLY SHITE!!!! DUDE!!!! Voldemort had a night mare... Holy shite.. i didn\'t think that could happened.. but then again... we are talking about the writer here... hee hee..anyhoo... love it.. oh shit.. the penguins are BACK!!!! *grins* i wonder... why r the penguins there?? hmmmm *cackles evilly* KILL HIM PENGUINS... kill him DEAD!!! *coughs*

Sev: *pops tessa in the head* shut up you idiotic woman...

tess: *blinks* ummmm *whispers* do you want Sev too???

Sev: *blinks* shit *runs*
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was great
person sbkar
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Eighteen review: Read this chapter while watching \"XXX\" out of the corner of my eye! LOL

Penguins so totally rock, roll, and rule!! I also like the insertion of the three corpses; nice touch!!!

Question: What will Io do to Ethan and Tate now he\'s uncollared and loved???? Something suitably wicked, I\'d assume?

Rock on...Cheers to the penguins!!!!
person fragonknight01
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Figures, you have this awesome story started and I fixate on Voldemort and his amazing toaster! Loved it, thanks, luv.
person fragonknight01
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I love penguins...you were talking about the big Emperor Penguins in the throne room, weren\'t you?
person fragonknight01
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact that you got it right...Hermione is dangerous! Don\'t forget it!!! And then who is the creepy guy from the void?
person Aisling
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL yea :P great chapter.... Draco\'s reaction LOL :P Colins not so innocent now-- so i can like the idea :P cya xx
person sbkar
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Getting caught, then having those that caught you take advantage of the space cleared is so much like my college days!!!
person Lady X
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!!!! You put sexy seether lyrics on this chapter and i am in love with it and i love you for putting them up and i will never foget it becaue i love seether as they are my favorite band sexy sexy Shauan Morgan *drools* Great chapter too. I await the next.