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by Locke

person Loki
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad! When do I get more? And in regards to Dumbledore - set fire to his beard for me. But a chainsaw\'ll do!

~Loki
person tessa3
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such evil ness... *giggles* I feel sorry for you Luc *waves happily* anyhoo.... love the story... can\'t really say much.. i am at work... maybe next chappie....
person Demitria Miriam
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*taps foot* Well... update faster! lol Or.. uhm, or I\'ll do something really horrible! Like tie a sock around Draco\'s throat and hang him with it!! (see! I\'m taking drastic, disturbing measures to ensure you update!) ^_^ Great job!
person Aisling
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOOL \'huni\' is a term of enderment, lol liek if i called u babe, or sweetie.. :D :D (honey) anyhow.. hahah toaster!!! LOl :D :D more soon cya later xx
person sbkar
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter four review: Well...we were _almost_ one cousin Dudley less!!! LOL
But, in the end, it\'s Harry\'s humanity that is the saving grace...

That and the bruises and toaster that Moldy Voldie woke up with!!!

Nice way to highlight the Ethereal powers...Now...Where, oh where, will
Harry and Io end up? How will they stay out of Dumbledore\'s grasp until
school starts? Will Io ever get rid of the collar? Will we be meeting more
Ethereals?

And, thanks for nod! So far, I love waking up in the wee hours of the night,
and having such a good story to look forward to!
person Sheree
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t get him mixed up with this Io character. That is just wrong, especially if his mate is supposed to be Draco. Dominate, powerful Harry is always much better than submissive weak Harry but that doesn\'t mean he has to screw every guy he meets including his servant. That\'s overdone and boring. Let\'s get to Harry and Draco as soon as possible please.
person elecktra
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! I\'m so liking this story!! Please update soon!
person sbkar
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job giving some insight into the Ethereal, Io.

And, to reintroduce us to the ever detestable Dolores Umbridge and Percy Weasley, along with the scum, Cornelius Fudge...
well, I do like how you handled them! But, will Draco find Harry before the three nasties and the Aurors do????

Harry\'s new powers are manifesting quite nicely, too! I\'d really like Dolores to get her own scars in retribution...Any way you can do that???
person tessa3
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tes: *eye twitches* HEY u cannot under NO circumstances have Luc..I won him fair and square

Luc: (twitches, glares) WOMAN.... if GB wants me... i will gladly go ... (pleads)

GB: *grins evilly, glances at hiding spot of whip*

Tess: *huffs* FINE!!!Review: O.O WT Holy FUCK!!!! PERCY, Fudge and DOLORES!!!! HOLY SHIT!!! THat i was not fuckiun expecting.. hot damn... and Io now belongs to Har *blinks* life really sucks for Har doesn\'t it...and Drac.. i guess i drew my conclusions wrong on him

Luc: no fuckin kidding (muttering)

tess: *glares* anyhoo... i like this fic.. not to mention i like Io.. but i want to wnow more.. i can\'t wait to see where you take this bad boy.. they are on the KB so they must be heading to the LC or back to Surrey... i really don\'tknow.. but *giggles* love the story... but i have to go now.. gotta work tonite

Luc: (dances) YES!!!
person Nony
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waits in anticipation*