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for Yoked

by psychocatblah

person myniephoenix
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great second chapter.... wonderful.... :)
person hobbit
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly awesome story. I love the detail you put into this. Great job, and best of luck to you on future writings

-selkie
person ura
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story but do not like the last sentence: \"He proved victorious and in spite of all of the awards and accolades he received, every time Draco Malfoy looked at him with his piercing grey eyes, Harry knew that what he really was. Malfoy\'s little slut.\"
person lilith
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s great! I hope Draco does find out about the bet (or at least that Harry has to obey his commands) before the end of the week!
person RebaWilliams
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked! I would really like it if you
person Alexa
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was great!
More, please!
person zentiis
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it! ^_^
that was brilliant, i hope you continue it... ^_-
person Ida
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was so wonderful! I clicked on it on impulse, and I must say I enjoyed it ever so much. Your way with words and your vocabulary are stunning, and your characterization of both leads is believable. Wow. It\'s well written, it fits canon, and God I love you. Thanks for posting! I hope there\'s more where this came from!