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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was so hot! Loved it!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely lovely lovely lovely.. i loved it sooo much...
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this story is going, and the idea is definitely cute- it\'s a perfect way to get them together, even if Harry does seem to accept it a little too quickly... anyway, I\'ve been reading it and I have a problem, and a serious one at that--
How does a person, namely Harry, move from having ocassional erotic dreams that involve other boys to realizing and accepting he was completely gay AND going after another guy who\'s very obviously more experienced, who has several stupid reasons to resent him and one or two very good ones to hate him, and who\'s a Slytherin who\'s been mocking his two best friends, helping Umbridge-The-Toad-Bitch-From-Hell, and getting Harry into trouble whenever he could? Especially a guy who\'s as confident, mean(the witty way, not Evil Bastard of Doom way!!) and handsome(which we know for a fact is true...) as Draco Malfoy.
Canon clearly shows that Harry just isn\'t very confident when it comes to relationships- I mean, look at the whole Cho thing, he\'d had a 3-year-long CRUSH on the girl, and he approached her too late, had awkward dates with her and one(or two, I can\'t remember) REALLY horrible kisses. Also he was completely embarrassed when he asked Parvati to go with him to the Yule Ball, and he spent the night trying to avoid her and then watch her go with someone else- which you can\'t really blame her for but consider the effect this might have on Harry\'s confidence on the romance front! I can\'t see how someone who only has that experience to rely on would corner someone like Draco and coax him into snogging in a bathroom. It\'s just too OOC for me. Now, the other way around... hmm
How does a person, namely Harry, move from having ocassional erotic dreams that involve other boys to realizing and accepting he was completely gay AND going after another guy who\'s very obviously more experienced, who has several stupid reasons to resent him and one or two very good ones to hate him, and who\'s a Slytherin who\'s been mocking his two best friends, helping Umbridge-The-Toad-Bitch-From-Hell, and getting Harry into trouble whenever he could? Especially a guy who\'s as confident, mean(the witty way, not Evil Bastard of Doom way!!) and handsome(which we know for a fact is true...) as Draco Malfoy.
Canon clearly shows that Harry just isn\'t very confident when it comes to relationships- I mean, look at the whole Cho thing, he\'d had a 3-year-long CRUSH on the girl, and he approached her too late, had awkward dates with her and one(or two, I can\'t remember) REALLY horrible kisses. Also he was completely embarrassed when he asked Parvati to go with him to the Yule Ball, and he spent the night trying to avoid her and then watch her go with someone else- which you can\'t really blame her for but consider the effect this might have on Harry\'s confidence on the romance front! I can\'t see how someone who only has that experience to rely on would corner someone like Draco and coax him into snogging in a bathroom. It\'s just too OOC for me. Now, the other way around... hmm
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Thank you:)
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot and a lot of other things as well i liked it
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*backhands draco up the head*
ain\'t nobody calls my pretty harry a slut (even though he seems to like it *cries*)
well i can honestly say i DID NOT SEE that fic heading in that direction....i\'m undecided, the writing was good and all but its just my own personal tastes (i don\'t like the whole \'dominance\' aka slut, thing).
but not bad, not bad at all
ain\'t nobody calls my pretty harry a slut (even though he seems to like it *cries*)
well i can honestly say i DID NOT SEE that fic heading in that direction....i\'m undecided, the writing was good and all but its just my own personal tastes (i don\'t like the whole \'dominance\' aka slut, thing).
but not bad, not bad at all
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really liked that ending... :D :D poor Harry ;P LOL :D but hey, it makes for good smut LOL
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv the first chapter.. u have to update!! :D cya xx
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Write more.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are such a genius to make D/H fics!! This one is fantastic! really good idea! Please update soon, ok? I miss change my world and it\'s sequell so much.. Congratulations for this new idea!! Hugs!