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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is really hot! Very steamy and delicious, and well-written too. (If it weren\'t for your AN, I wouldn\'t have known English wasn\'t your first language.) Anyway, I hope you\'ll be writing and posting more stories soon. I really enjoy angsty, edgy erotica with believable emotion, and you\'ve done a great job! Bravo. :)
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PS -- I can\'t believe I was the first person to review this story. What\'s up with that? This is really good stuff. I have no idea why this fic has been overlooked, but please don\'t get discouraged and stop writing! I\'m not the easiest critic in the world by any means. I have a Master\'s degree in English Lit and I\'m pretty well-read in the classics as well as contemporary poetry and fiction. I enjoy reading imaginative smut also, but only if it\'s well-written and has some psychological complexity. I\'m not one of those fangirls who posts good reviews for everything I read even if it\'s mediocre. But I sincerely enjoyed your fics and I wish you the best of luck with your writing.