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I\'m soo stupid, i keep checking to see if you\'ve updated but i never thought you had!
I\'m crying my lil heart out here! I didn\'t think you could have the guts to do that, you evil ****!!!
im sooooooooo upset, the ending was a bit abrupt after that, you should re-write the last few chapters expanding them! i\'ld read em :D oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nooooooooooooo its all over, things have changed, they really have! it was da first H/D fic i read nd u got me hooked so thanx for a new view on the world
i love your writing!

Nice ending... But did you really Really have to kill Draco? I mean, come on. You can\'t just kill him like that! It\'s against the law. You should do another story.

Lovely fic. You are quite right, it\'s not a darkfic by any means. I\'d call it a melancholy fic, it\'s permeated with a gentle sadness that encourages thought and, quite rightly, poses more question that it answers, just like life. I liked it immensely, so please don\'t feel bad if I offer some concrit. You have potential and my observation are really very few and intended to help you grow as a writer.

Your english is excellent, but you have a few vocabulary problems. You consistently write \'thump\' for \'thumb\', a banal mistake but as \'thump\' means to hit violently a person and it\'s a verb, while \'thumb\' is a finger you can see that it\'s a little irritating to constantly correct in one\'s head while reading. You also use \'vicinity\' in several occasions relating it to a look or way of looking. There is no such words in current use in English and if there were, it would mean something akin to \'proximity = the being near something in a spatial sense only\'. I really have no idea of what you meant by this word, but sometimes it seems to mean \'viciously = in a cruel or pettily mean way\' and sometimes it seems to mean something akin to \'intimacy = sharing space in the physical, mental and emotional sense with someone\'. There\'s also an odd phrase: (QUOTE)

Okay...Usually i just wait to do a review as a whole till i read all the chapters then just review the final chapter. But i just had to say how much im loving this story so far. Its really sweet. The boys are soooooo adorable together. And i cant wait for the relationship to heat up, lol. I just wanted to mention I LOVE QUEER AS FOLK!!!! Lol, when u put the line in \"I just want to be with someone who only wants to be with me\" an alarm went off in my head, lol. God I love that show....so sad that it ended, but as they say. All good things must come to an end, lol. Okay..Im gunna continue to read now, lol.

wow..okay another review b4 ive actually finished the story. Okay im vrying like a mad woman now. But yes...i remember the happier times in the story, and i was content. U have no idea how broken up i am after reading this chapter. It really hurst. but like u were saying in the story. It os better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all. Im sure that harry should celebrate draco\'s life, and be happy with the knowlede that he truley was the only one to know and love draco. I too at this point believe i am better for reading. It is better to have read and cried my eyes out, then never to have read at all, and not experienced this story to its fullest. You made me feel every emotion in the book while reading. For that u truly have talent. Enough so that I know it would have made JK herself proud of her reader ^__^

Well Im done, and the only comment i have is thank you. This was truly a beautiful story. I can say i havent read n e thing this nice since well cannon, lol. I started reading around 2am of sorts and now it is 10:30am....ive laughed ive cried (a whole lotta crying) but in the end it was worth it. I also have to say i loved how the chapters were song titles, or lyrics. I enjoy most of those songs. If there is n e mailing list that u have i\'d love to be added to it. Please write more. U really have a talent for it. Im soooo gunna send this story along to most of my friends now, lol. Owww..I know of one friend who will read it, then kill me for the ending, lol. She\'s a huge draco fan, lol. Tahnks again for the great story! <333 ^__^

omg. tears are streaming down my face. have been since dumbledore announced \'it\'. it was wonderfully awesome and extremely well written. even though i\'m bawling like a baby, i love this story.

I just found your story...maybe two days ago? Its been awhile since Ive been on here so...Yeah. Well if a story is completed I usually dont review until Im finished...but throughout your story I was like \"WOW\" and then Draco died. And although it was sad...It made sense with the plot. I must say....this story was and is amazing. Im very impressed...you made my eyes water ..not sure why but ya did and for that I must applaude you. Great writing, Im impressed. Congratulations on a wonderful story. Oh and..I agree...in no way was it ever a darkfic...no matter what character died, so you were right in you label. Anyways, I just wanted to let you know my thoughts. See ya round

You made me cry. :( But this was so good... It\'s so sweet and emotionally draining, and... and.. I don\'t know what. I just loved this story, and the last few chapters were so unexpected and yet, so utterly perfect.

*sigh* Despite my blubbering self, I\'m glad I read this story--you have quite the talent for story telling.

I loved this story! your did a fantastic job!