schedule
July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful update... truely wonderful... keep up the good work for the next chapter... my question is... was harry mad at draco for what he said at the end??.... hmmm.. gave me something to ponder... update soon..
schedule
July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, they got caught! What happens next? Can\'t wait for the next update!
schedule
July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh this keeps getting better and better. <3
schedule
July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do realize it\'s Crabbe and Goyle, right?
schedule
July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 rocked! I like the ending alot and i cant wait to see what happens next!lol! I had to re-read the whole jelousy part but i fianlly somehow understood it! It was beautiful.....oh my! Did i just say that1 o well! plz update soon!!
schedule
July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter is very intense and intriguing, draws one in.
schedule
July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about the \"ANON\" review...I must have been falling asleep as I read chapter 13.
The bit about jealousy...I\'ve read a few times, and I still say it\'s convoluted. This is not a bad thing, it\'s confusing, which makes one think. The thinking is a very good thing. I tried reading it aloud and would find myself trailing off, because of some random thought or memory. Thus... my former comment.
The bit about jealousy...I\'ve read a few times, and I still say it\'s convoluted. This is not a bad thing, it\'s confusing, which makes one think. The thinking is a very good thing. I tried reading it aloud and would find myself trailing off, because of some random thought or memory. Thus... my former comment.
schedule
July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I
schedule
July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Thirteen review: Now, don\'t get me wrong, but, how can one be \"tucking\" on someone\'s tie??? LOL
This last chapter, about jealousy, seemed confused and twisted to me. Very convoluted.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Hope it helps...I have to pass on all that grammar the nuns pounded into my brain somehow.
This last chapter, about jealousy, seemed confused and twisted to me. Very convoluted.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Hope it helps...I have to pass on all that grammar the nuns pounded into my brain somehow.
schedule
July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pansy is always stirring up trouble, even when she doesn\'t know it!!!
Oh, and \"he fleeted from the scene.\" .... should be \"fled\"
Oh, and \"he fleeted from the scene.\" .... should be \"fled\"