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Hola Yucatan Handbook!! I have been reading this story for awhile now and never wanted to stop! I love the sex scenes! Hott!BUt I also love the between parts!! YAY! u still going with this? hope ya do! bye!

ORGASMIC is all i can say

There are so many aspects of this story that remind me of my college friends....

I just realized that I have never left you a review, but I have been reading all along. I have to agree that too much information can ruin a story. Another author on this site devoted an entire \'chapter\' to her break up with her boyfriend. It\'s too bad you can\'t see me, because I am shaking my head in disgust. This is a great fic, I know English is a SL for you, but I am really obsessive. Loose means things aren\'t tight. Lose means you have lost something.
I\'m so glad that you developed the relationship naturally, instead of one day, just going for it. Not that that can\'t be a good thing sometimes, too. Don\'t mind me, I may be a little repressed these days.

I liked the first sex scene. It wasn\'t the hottest thing I\'ve ever read, but it was realistic. First times shouldn\'t be the best sex in the world. I loved this scene too. It had a different vibe than the other one. This one seemed like sex between two people who are more used to having sex with eachother. Even though this chapter didn\'t really add anything to move the plot forward, I liked that it shows where Harry and Draco have progressed in their relationship.

very good story, please update again soon! <3

i fucking love you! i have been working like crazy so i havent been able to read the updates but now i have and i am dying for MORE!!!!!!!

So true your comment about authors notes and telling too much about yourself. I have turned myself purple trying to tell some of these authors the same thing. The mystique of the story and as I wouldn\'t want to have a book with authors notes that are at random throughout the book are truly lost. I do try to commit myself when I review to only mention recommendations that attribute to the betterment of the original story and don\'t bother to waste the author and fellow readers with my own ideas as to how the story should be going as to who should top and what personality so and so should have and I can\'t help but feel that the author is opening a whole new can of worms when they invite comments on how the story should be written. Gosh if the readers have so much insite as to how the story should be going, why not just write their own. Thanks for the listen. Great story by the way , thanks for the amusement.

I really love your story! I like how you keep things real. Usually in H/D slash stories boys are jumping one on other nd shagging like bunnies. I like to see shyness and timidity in your story and I like that it is kind of simple - you have some main topics and plot is built around them - Draco\'s choice, Harry\'s destiny, their relaitionship. Story is really good. Only one thing - their first time (sex). I have a feeling that something is missing there. Maybe more forplay? And it is kind of strange that one night they decide that they will have sex and then they are in the bed almost in the next scene. There could be something more between. Maybe time with friends or whatever. No harm meant - I really like everything - just an opinion.

Ahhh the sweetness!! Still love it babe! <3