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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, this is by far the MOST interesting and compelling story I've EVER read!! Please, please update soon, i can't wait. Oh, and by the way I know that you said you won't guide what happens to them and what not, but I just wanted to say, I AM a fan of happy endings...For both people of the couple...
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*is speechless*
Ok, I just found and read this story. That must be one of the most unusual HP-Fanfics I've ever read. And I've read many. Congratulations. A great idea and an even better realization.
*waits (im)patiently for update*
Ok, I just found and read this story. That must be one of the most unusual HP-Fanfics I've ever read. And I've read many. Congratulations. A great idea and an even better realization.
*waits (im)patiently for update*
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW, interesting point of view.
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A real quick review... Like it so far can't wait to see where it goes.. one spelling error... 'during winter holydays' -Holidays... or where you going for 'holy' days? Anywho off to read some more...
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay... two more mistakes.. *Hey I'm being your beta this time how cool is that* ... 1: '5 minutes later I call him, of floo him, or worry about why he didn't call me' = 'or floo him' and 2:"What was the last time you were away from him for a long time?" = 'When was the last'
other than that it's good... never read a fic like this one before.... on to the next chapter!
other than that it's good... never read a fic like this one before.... on to the next chapter!
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well - I hope you do have Harry go with Draco to see the shrink... oh and 'He later told me he though I was the most stuck up child he'd met so far.' = 'told me he thought I was' - that it for this chapter on to the next!
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You got flamed for asking for reviews? Love, that's BULLS#IT! I've known authors that refuse to write another word if they don't at least get 10 reviews! Don't listen to flames... burn them and dance on the ashes singing something like "Take that you little P.O.S... who's in flaming now huh..." um... yeah You go Alexa! On to the next Chapter! hehehe... love ya!
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow ok I have a few mistakes... I think...
1: 'and what would mean that further investigation is needed...' um I'm not 100% but should it be = 'and that would mean...'?
2:'The fruit weren't on the table, for one' um again not 100% sure but = 'The fruit wasn't on...'
3:'It's supposed to me a good thing when you better yourself for love' = 'to be a good...'
4:'Harry Potter's Draco, that you loose sight of actual Draco?"' = 'sight of the actual..'
I can't wait to see what happens!
1: 'and what would mean that further investigation is needed...' um I'm not 100% but should it be = 'and that would mean...'?
2:'The fruit weren't on the table, for one' um again not 100% sure but = 'The fruit wasn't on...'
3:'It's supposed to me a good thing when you better yourself for love' = 'to be a good...'
4:'Harry Potter's Draco, that you loose sight of actual Draco?"' = 'sight of the actual..'
I can't wait to see what happens!
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lovin it! - And yes it was believable!
Okay this one got me and since you really are the beta around here I'll have to ask you:
'I might lead to me being content, but not necessarily to me being with Harry.' um...- 'It might have lead'? what do you think?
On to the next chapter!
Okay this one got me and since you really are the beta around here I'll have to ask you:
'I might lead to me being content, but not necessarily to me being with Harry.' um...- 'It might have lead'? what do you think?
On to the next chapter!
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until Harry goes to visit Frank with Draco!
'I don't fell like I have anything elso to say right now."' = 'I don't feel like'
'I don't fell like I have anything elso to say right now."' = 'I don't feel like'