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by myniephoenix

person sbkar
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 57 review: Harry\'s told them of Hermione\'s involvement in his attack; so far, no one is going after
Dumbledore to follow-up on the gender-switch, Hermione alludes to...Just one question: who\'s going to kill Hermione?
person brianna
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far there gonna have to pay right!
person elecktra
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! i loved it!! Please update soon!
person RissSta
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh, update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!
person Death in a Pink Boa
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, very nice. Please do update soon. I wonder why FFN kicked you off? Coud have been because of the evil rap seen that was far to expliside for my tastes? I\'ve never really liked reading noncons. Please go into elaborate details about how Hermoine is torchered! I would realy enjoy that.
person emeradraven
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww poor harry! i cant get over how evil theat bitch hermione is! damn her! harry isn\'t really pregnant with one of their babies...is he? cause that\'d just be mean and you know it =P
they\'re all animagi? thats really cool ^.^ are they all big cats? i loved the idea, i don\'t think i;ve read anything like this before it rules, keep it up darlin!
luv ya

emz
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person Erin
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey... so far i like your story. it was recommended to me, so i\'m definately going to read it, i just cant remember if i ever had b4 or not! anyways... i myself being a fellow writer, i wanted to point out one small mistake... just a misspelled word. hopefully you dont take offense, i just know i like my things to be corrected if someone catches it! anywho

its the last paragraph... the \'and\' that should be \'had\' i believe, and i tried separating the paragraph so that you could see where i mean. like i said b4... i dont mean to nitpick! on the flip side... keep up the good writing and i\'m looking forward to reading the rest of the story.. and i promise to review again! luvs!

Harry made his way back over to the sofa and picked up the notebook that lay there and sighed. He shelved it on the bookcase near the door before grabbing two guitar cases and a small bag and heading out the door for the venue of the night. He was so excited to play tonight, they were going to try out some new material that Harry

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been working on. He felt that it was a good thing it was just a small bar, just in case the new stuff didn
person Seattlite
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was reading this on ff.net and was upset to see it gone recently. I love your story, it is one that has me constantly coming back for more. I can\'t wait for Harry and Draco to finally bond. I love the personalities in this story, original but not too far fetched! Please keep writing!
~Seattlite
person Stray-89
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr not happy with FF.net at the mo, glad to see that you got the whole thing up! happy happy happy! nice update. i love it. please update sometime soon.
person doxie
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally!!! you\'re here. i missed you lots!