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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story so far ( am a complete sucker for mating fics) but something seems off with the sentence structure/something/grammer. Perhaps a beta would be useful.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps it is the fact that I\'m part Irish and part Apache and Cherokee, but I\'m of the opinion I could give you a couple of good ideas for torture of Hermione. Of course a couple of other friends of mine have some good ideas as well, they\'re Norse Heathens.
You really have a knack for this type of fiction. Please let me know when you update. Since you\'ve also read MY fic and reviewed, if you have any suggestions of where to take the story please I would be honored.
B. M. Gray
You really have a knack for this type of fiction. Please let me know when you update. Since you\'ve also read MY fic and reviewed, if you have any suggestions of where to take the story please I would be honored.
B. M. Gray
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwww, i can\'t wait for the update, and heres where i have to make one critique, of all the big cats, the cheetah is the only one that purrs. so says animal planet, they had a special on it today.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your story!!!
I can\'t wait to read the rest of the chapters.
...and the SEQUEL!!!
(If you make one... which you definitely should!!!)
You ROCK!!
I can\'t wait to read the rest of the chapters.
...and the SEQUEL!!!
(If you make one... which you definitely should!!!)
You ROCK!!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw...poor Harry. The panther/leopard part...very creative. And the purring...so cute. I love this story. <3
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love you!
i need more!
i love this story. i realllllllly do.
feel so crappy for harry...*sigh* stupid rapists! GAH!
why is draco not flipping out about others touching harry...although there are more pressing matters...
continue, please. *smiles happily*
i need more!
i love this story. i realllllllly do.
feel so crappy for harry...*sigh* stupid rapists! GAH!
why is draco not flipping out about others touching harry...although there are more pressing matters...
continue, please. *smiles happily*
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And another great chapter. Love the idea that Harry\'s animagus can help him with his touching probs.
Poor Draco though. He\'s going to have a rough time of it, not being able to be with his mate the way he wants to...
Love
Wiz
Poor Draco though. He\'s going to have a rough time of it, not being able to be with his mate the way he wants to...
Love
Wiz
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To be expected that he wouldn\'t want to be touched. A panther? It suits him well. Please update again sometime.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated i love this story im so happy i cant wait till the next chapter is out
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!
OMG YOU MUST UPDATE NOW! NOW I TELL YOU! I loved it! You really must update NOW!
InsideMyWorld
OMG YOU MUST UPDATE NOW! NOW I TELL YOU! I loved it! You really must update NOW!
InsideMyWorld