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for Close Enough

by myniephoenix

person Ferfer
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh. You have the most evil cliffhangers. I\'m ready to see what they do to Hermione. Good story!
person sbkar
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter sixty review: Of course, she\'d be in library...I can\'t wait to hear her excuses about why she did
what she did to Harry via the others.

Point of presentation: Could you put a line between the paragraphs? If we get your longer postings,
it gets a bit headache-inducing if there is no separation such as that.
person Heather
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Author - you\'re a bloody tease! :P Be careful - you\'re going to spoil us with these frequent updates. I must admit, though, I\'m a bit surprised (and a bit disappointed) that the bushy haired bitch\'s location was so easily obtained. It was plainly obvious as well... the library? Like, where else would she be? Besides, I would have thought that since she already knows about the Marauder\'s Map that she would think twice about being in the castle since Harry was found. But, alas, I have faith that you will explain her actions - all of them - in due time.
person Sahira
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Love this. I just read the whole thing trough and it was amazing!!! Hermione should be hanged like at the old days..Mahahahaaa!!! Poor poor Harry:(....AND what the hell is going to happen to Ronnikins??? UPDATE Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease!!! I wanna see some Bitch-killing!!!
person Lady X
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate Herm now. I really do. Poor draco and harry. I ALMOST feel sorry for what is going to happen to Herm but not quite. I mean I can\'t blame her for going off the deep end...I will just blame you just kidding. Can\'t wait for more and good for Harry for trying to protect Draco.
person Deans Darling
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Powerful! I am so very impressed. You did a wonderful job of dealing with the situation. Draco was perfect. Righteous indignation abounded. Harry loves him very much. I think this is the best chapter to date. Looking forward to the next. Wow!
DD
person Jenna
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story was good up untill u let them rape harry- i think u should like let them use a time turner and go bace and save hime before he gets raped..
person nele
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When i first saw this fic i read 57 chapters in one night, yes i do know that i need sleep, but that is not the point. This story is wonderful and not just the cliche harry in a type of creature fic. And i normally don\'t like OC but yours are really good. And when i saw this last chapter was up i just about jumped for joy. can\'t wait for next part
person chaos
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* you can\'t leave it there!!!! how will I ever sleep ~ waiting for the next chapter is such sweet torture!

Awesome chapter, the angst of Draco and the desolation of Harry came through loud and clear. I eagerly await the next installment.....*Please oh please let it be soon!*
person Krazy (I really should start logging in...)
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very touching. I\'d say more, but my eyes hurt. X_X Tired. Can\'t wait for more though! ^_^

*~* K *~*