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by myniephoenix

person shola
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man i hope they kill her torture her for what she done take no mercy how can she be smart and so stupid and evil and not think they wouldnt find out cant wait 4 more hope u have a great day bye shola!!!!!!
person Missi
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, psycho bitch\'s at the fuckin library?!?! I hope she hurts. A lot. Please make them make her hurt. I like this chapter, and can\'t wait for the next one.
person emma
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i am so happy you updated i hope you put out the next chapter soon
person Wizzel
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

Another great chapter. I think Cord\'s reasoning behind her denying Draco entrance into the pensieve is sound, if a little thin. Draco might lose control... or he might want to put Harry on a pedestal and treat him like glass.

Hope Hermione gets what she deserves! Usually, she\'s one of my fav characters, but even I can\'t find any sympathy in me for your Hermione...

Can\'t wait for the next chapter!

Love
Wiz
person acr
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the story. However, I find the Cord and Cloe characters a little tiresome. I am interested in seeing Harry interact with familiar characters, rather than these OC\'s. They have a little Mary-Sue-ness in that Harry ALWAYS turns to them, and they ALWAYS know what\'s wrong and how to help him.
person Proprieter_of_Honeydukes
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write more!!! i have to know what happens. the idea of a evil vengeful hermione never crossed my mind...i thouht ron had broken out of azkaban. i can\'t wait to read more...please email me when you update. you are awesome!
~Proprieter_of_Honeydukes~
person Missi
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sevvie\'s a vampire! *sing song, the whole thing* I hope the bitch gets it! The Kiss is too good for her! I hope it\'s painful!
person Fefs
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please, please, please start updating quickly again, please?? Your fic is just so good that i\'ll loose my mind thinking i\'ll have to wait one second to read the next chapter!! Please!!
person emma
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey im so glad you update i really liked this chapter and i cant wait to find out what happens next i hope you update again soon
person Miyu
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its best that he doesn\'t see that. But It is better that they know. Please update soon.