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by myniephoenix

schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omgoodness I love this story I am just sorry we don't get to see them together now or the babies I love babies *pouting just a little* Thanks for the story though maybe you have a sequel in ya huh?
person Morgan
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like you storys. This one is just as good. The only thing that I didn't care for was the non-con. But Harry got a happy ending, so all is well.

Write more STORYS!!!
person KJ
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS REALLY GOOD SO FAR. BUT I CANT REALLY SEE RON AND HERMIONE DOING SOMETHING LIKE THAT. THEY ARE THE GOLDEN TRIO. ITS REALLY WIERD HAVING THEM BE ENEMIES.
person Bethany
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say that I love your story. I read this story months ago and started to read it again today. I just have one question. In the second chapter you said that Dex is Cloe's brother but if I remember correctly in a later chapter you say that Cloe is Blaise Zabini's sister. Is that a small goof or are Blaise and Dex related and they don't know it? Please e-mail me back. This will drive me crazy without an answer.
person rcj
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Nice story this far, but i have a question?
Aren't the succubus female?? i think the incubus are the male ones.

rcj
person Kordula
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m blown away. Completely blown away.
The level of maturity and emotions in this story are ... beyond amazing.
It was an enthralling story filled with powerful characterizations and extremely well handled sensitive topics.
I applaud you for being able to write such a beautiful and heartfelt story.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Umph* reader falls of her chair....father?? Good very good.
person ElysianMusic (srry waaay too lazy to sign in...as usual)
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS THE MOST AMAZING STORY I HAVE EVER READ! AND LET ME TELL YOU I HAVE READ A LOT!!!!DAYUM! GREAT JOB!!!
person dragoneyes
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the harry you portray is too perfect to be interesting, and lacks internal conflict. furthermore, your characters lack depth and often contradict their thoughts with their words.
person Ben
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW.......... this is a nice twist I do love, your work, except one section, it got me squeemish, but other than that I did laugh as well as shed a tear hear and there and I went cold when Draco found out about the ( the section that will not be named ). I would love to see more of your work. please....... Ben