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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this was great i hope harry is really ok cant wait 4 the next chapter wonder what going to happen with ron this was nice bye have a great day shola!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Would tat we could have that spell here, in the real world...
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...Harry does have a heart of gold! Too bad Hermione couldn\'t see that!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always. I look forward to your next offering.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, I\'ve just read this WHOLE FRICK\'N THING and I\'ve got a few things to say!
First off, it\'s fucking HOGSMEADE - not Hogsmead, if you write a story about another story you should know a little about the first story; like maybe reading the damned thing first.
Second, RON? Come on, give us a break, he is so OC it\'s not even funny. And do you really think if he had \'lost it\' like that, that Hermione would have allowed herself to be abused? I think not!
Third, why don\'t you just suggest to your readers to read Beren\'s works instead of trying to steal her stuff (you didn\'t do nearly as well as she does).
Fourth, if you do have a beta (which you claim you do) get a new one! This one sucks! A beta should catch at least the canon spelling errors, if not the lameness of your story line.
Fifth, it was probably removed from FF when someone complained because it was written so poorly.
Sixth and finally, if you are afraid to write about the \'closeness\' between our boys, then don\'t put the story on an Adult fan site, it\'s an insult to all of us.
ME
First off, it\'s fucking HOGSMEADE - not Hogsmead, if you write a story about another story you should know a little about the first story; like maybe reading the damned thing first.
Second, RON? Come on, give us a break, he is so OC it\'s not even funny. And do you really think if he had \'lost it\' like that, that Hermione would have allowed herself to be abused? I think not!
Third, why don\'t you just suggest to your readers to read Beren\'s works instead of trying to steal her stuff (you didn\'t do nearly as well as she does).
Fourth, if you do have a beta (which you claim you do) get a new one! This one sucks! A beta should catch at least the canon spelling errors, if not the lameness of your story line.
Fifth, it was probably removed from FF when someone complained because it was written so poorly.
Sixth and finally, if you are afraid to write about the \'closeness\' between our boys, then don\'t put the story on an Adult fan site, it\'s an insult to all of us.
ME
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gracias for the tip off chica i enjoyed it it was very mucho! hit me up when you got a new chapter or a new story por favor. gracias
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter. Hope you update soon!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am happy to see Draco/Harry moments. Please update again soon.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! The floor is beneath him, huh? I never would have guessed it. Poor Draco, will he -ever- live this one down? And Harry\'s choking on his giggles was priceless! I can\'t wait for more.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute-I said the same thing to my husband (who promptly declared me insane and offered to take me to St. Mungo\'s. He\'s not origional, but he\'s sweet). I love this fic, thanks so much for updating!