rate_review Reviews

I would just like to say that personally I don\'t give a fuck whether the story is cannon, AU, OC or includes a mary sue so long as its written as well as this one is and I\'m sure if she were here my dear freind Memdrake would say the same! This is a WONDERFULL story and I love it to bits and would hope that you will simply delete the offending reveiw/s and carry on with this marvelouse fic.

All my support

*Eowyns elixure

P.S your beta must be marvelouse by the way as I can\'t remember a time when I\'ve noticed a spelling or punctuation mistake, which when you think about it is no mean feat.

Hi there. Just wanted to say your story is VERY good! I\'d say you are a very talented author and I can\'t wait for the finally of this story and hopefully the many more.

~Chrissy

I love this story! There is so much going on in it. Draco\'s caring nature for Harry seems so out of charater until he makes comments about things being beneath him or being cruel. i can\'t wait until you finish this story and start on the next one. It\'s intersting how you gave Snape a daughter and had her mate and Blaise be brother and sister. i\'m hooked!!! LOL. Thanks again for writing this story...AWSOME!!!!!

Well, fuck everyone else. I think this fic is fucking wonderful and I check everyday to see if its updated. You write wonderfully, your beta is good, your plot is fantastic and even though I don\'t like evil Hermiones, you\'ve done an excellent job portraying & making me wish torture on her. Few authors can make me hate a character so much that it burns. Don\'t stop writing. Even if we don\'t tell you often, your story makes our days a little more bearable.

firstly I press thanks upon you for writing this story, and I must review hence hearing the news of your lees-than admiring reviews from other readers, this is currently one of my favorite stories, and I would just like to comment to you (and your beta)to keep up the great (and hard) work.
P.S - you are right they must be idiots to keep reading, and you did state in you summary all details... so poo on them!

i ono about other ppl but i personaly love your story !! its so sweet
and i absolutly LOVE leopards !! >XD especially the black panthers :D
plz keep writing !! and i\'ll keep reading ^^ <3

I applaud your courage to even put yourself out there with a fanfic. I can\'t immagine putting myself in the firing line. Just know that I think your story is wonderful, and even reccomended it to a friend. You can write, and not everyone who attempts this can write well. Still, even if I don\'t like a fic, I just stop reading. I don\'t write bad reveiws because I can\'t cast the first stone. Thank you for your entertaining story!

Some people are just horrible with they way they review. If they read over 60 chappies and they didn\'t like it why didn\'t they stop? that tell me the that reviewer is STUPID. I have seen other stories reviewed by someone that uses that same name and all they do is b*tch and moan about the story and pick it apart. This is FANFIC. If that person wanted you to follow the books so closely why don\'t they just read the books and leave the fanfic and the writers alone. I myself am enjoying the story alot sure there were a couple of things that kind of confused me but it didn\'t really make a big different to the overall plot of the story.

The reviewer talked about how Hermione let herself be abused.... well you would be surprised how many people are smart, etc but are still let that happen to them. Plus it was all part of your plot that Hermione planned it that way.

About Ron being OC well he was being \"controlled\" by Hermione.... if any character is the most OC it is Hermione but I don\'t care for some reason I kind of like the stories that have one or two of Harry\'s friends turn their backs on him. I myself have a story where they don\'t get along as well as they used to only I hit a road block a LONG while ago and haven\'t worked it out yet.

But back to your story I think it is very well written and your beta is doing ok nobody is perfect not even a beta. (I mean no offense to them) Please keep writing and don\'t let that one person get you down. You have almost 200 reviews for this story so far and it looks like very, very few ones that are not good reviews. As far as the \"Smut\" or whatever again I have seen a reviewer with the same name complain about other stories not having smut to their liking... yes this is an adult site but it doesn\'t say you have to have smut in the first chapter or even smut anywhere. It just means that there should be content in the story that is not considered for people under the age of 17 or 18 yrs of age.

According to the front page

http://adultfan.nexcess.net

it says \"This group and webpage is to be a safe haven for all Authors of Adult Fan Fiction. All tv shows, movies, books, etc are accepted. Fiction must be Darkfic, Hard R or NC-17. All pairings/lifestyles welcome.\"

I don\'t see where it says you have to have smut. As far as the story being taken off ff.net well they are strange sometimes and peoples stories get deleted for unknown reasons.

Again please keep writing you are doing so well you said this is your first fic if believe and you are doing great much better then me I only got up to chapter 14 on my first fic before I got stuck... my HP fic is only at like 8 or 9 chappies where I am stuck. You are past 60 and still going please keep going.... recharge those batteries and keep going and going and going..... LOL .... you know what I mean.

Is Harry really okay? Need chapter 65!

When I read your author\'s note, I felt I had to let you know that your story is fabulous and I adore it. I think that you\'re a wonderful author and that the people who didn\'t even bother reading the bloody summary are eejits. You have loads of loyal fans who adore you so don\'t let the twits get you down!
xxx :)
PS If you need something to cheer you up, I sooo recommend listening to \'Champagne Supernova\' by Oasis; I\'m listening to it right now and it\'s putting me in a fantastic mood!