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Wow, loved those two chapters. The scene with Harry and Allie dancing with the kids in the sprinklers was the most adorable little thing, and the way Sev told Harry that he wanted to have kids, and asked him to marry him! Ooh just loved it! Cant Wait for the chapters to come! - Jess

This is so beautiful and sweet. *sniff*

*scratches head*

How to review this story, without seeming rude...

I guess I will just say that I do love this story.

It is interesting and I think a very unique story that I have read in the HP fandom.

I also want to say that I kinda figured that you were into the Livestyle (that is how you say it right?) yourself. Seeing as how there was so much detail into the relationships and how they communicate within the group. How to address each other and so forth.

I also wonder if maybe you are from the States and participate in the Bike Clubs (is that how it is to be addressed?), seeing as there is so much detail into the stops and regions and the scenery, and so forth.

I personally never have done anything like that, but my elder brother is very much into it. He goes on the trips when he is not away from home. Being in the military limits the amount of off time that a person can have. When he worked in the subs, he was gone for many months at a time, and since he has been home, divorved, remarried, he has gone on the trips.

Being as he is 17 years my senior and his eldest son is only a few years younger than me, I only know parts of that life, such as he has a Harley (that is a given) and that he is in a \'bike club\' not a gang, that he goes on the long trips, and that is about it.

Other than that, I think I am happy to know nothing else.

Ah.... Anyways I love the story, I love how much detail and character development there is within the story and plot.

I wonder though, is everything with that has to do with the War and Voldemort over and done with?

Cause won\'t there be pockets of resistance and new \'dark lords\' popping up and making waves?

And won\'t the best way to make a name of one\'s self be to take out Harry Potter \'the boy who lived\'?

Would they if they had informants within the wizarding community know of Severus and Harry\'s trip?

And try to make waves, i.e. attack?

Or is this just a story about the two of them and their relationship and Lifestyle?

Either way I think this is a great story. Keep up the awesome work, Coolsa.

I swear this story is just adorable, I was a little iffy about the Sub/Dom relationship at first, but its just so sweet. And I love Grant and Damon, their so cute. Please update soon, I love it! - Jess

I am enjoying the look into the world of D/s. It is always nice when the person writing about this lifestyle is actually living the lifestyle. I hate it when people don\'t live it but try and write it. Intriqueing chapter ~ I was sure Harry was going to pitch a fit. I am curious to see if this \"allie\" is going to try and cause trouble with Sev and Harry.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

AWWWW! Cute. I really like Severus in this one, and the nickname \'little one\' is just plain sweet. Uuuum, please don\'t think me rude, but are you a male or a female? You don\'t have to answer if I\'ve offended you.

Another incredible chapter. Keep up the great work!

Awww! how sweet! Sev is taking care of harry! GREAT CHAPPIE, UPDATE SOON!

This is bloody good. I love sub. Harry, he\'s such a slut. Brilliant.
chapter 5 I thought poor Sev. chapter 6 I thought Lucky Harry.
More please. great read.

Aww! That chapter was so adorable! omg, I loved the socks part, Fabulous.

lol, cant wait for the next chapter - Jess