rate_review Reviews

Great job!!!! It\'s kinda sad that subs have to go through what harry did...Doms should be nicer like sev!!!
I love this fic! Do those places really exist? You\'ve been there right? Me, I\'m a East Coast NYC girl...Dont see the country or the plains much!
THese places sound cool!
Keep on writing!

Really enjoying your story. Love Harry with the children.
Hope you update soon. Just a great fanfic.

Awww! How sweet and ROMANTIC!
It\'s times like these that i am VERY glad I was born a woman! We can show emotion!!
Please keep up the good work and update soon (although I dont think we need to worry about that...
you update so quickly!)

dont stop posting just for telling it like it is. i like your story alot. but i like your way of writing its like you dont leave out the bad stuff just because its bad... if that makes sense to you. i also like how you post chapters so fast :)

Wonderfully written glimpse into the abuse that is often mis-construed by wanna-be Doms. It brought a tear to my eye, but they turned into happy tears when Sev and Max knew just what to say to punish Harry but still lead him to being a better sub. Looking forward to the next installment.

OH, WOW! I just love the expressions each gave when Severus asked Harry to marry him, the speechlessness, the questions, still the self-doubt lingering, the little voice relating everything going on in their minds, critically off tangent. Just loved it!

Double Wow, now I\'ve got to keep up with you if you post every day. Remember we still have RL going on and can\'t afford too much vacation time from our jobs. lol

The story just gets better and better and now with their new lives ahead of them, Ahhh, just great, really really great!!!

Post when you can, and I\'ll read when I can and review when I catch up - lol

I think you did a wonderful job with the latest chapter. And you are all too correct. Besides, it is unrealistic to think that Harry would not have been adversely affected by the treatment he received from his uncle and other nefarious people. I look forward to the next chapter, you have a wonderful way of writing.

*ahem* In a Texan flare I wish to wish them a happy union marriage life together.

YEEHAW!!!

That is all.

I am soooooo happy for them. Harry is going to be soooooo HAPPY.

Keep up the wonderful work, Coolsa.

I\'m so glad you\'re writing this story with so much detail on the country they\'re riding through. My Dad\'s a biker but since I could never get a regular good ole bike to balance I figure it\'d be a bit unsafe for me to take up that lie style. hehehe! I do have to protest though that Missouri is not made up completely of cows, there\'s lots of horses, hay, and corn fields. I should know I live near St. Louis and often go too columbia. Anyways great fic lots of good Harry/Severus. I hope you give us more to read soon. Toodles -Mashell

Fantastic story. I love it. You have managed to create such a wonderful relationship between Harry and Sev. I can\'t wait for the next chapters.