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Aww... that chapter was so sweet.

And the stalking continues. Another great chapter. Thanks for the back info on Harry\'s bad relatioinship. I was curious and wasn\'t sure how much more we would get. People can be assholes and it breaks my heart. You\'ve done such a lovely job with this. Hope your hands are feeling a bit better. I know how it is--I got JRA when I was 11 and people look at me a bit strangely now when I complain about my hands hurting (I\'m 24 now so still quite young in most people\'s eyes for arthritis). Hope all is well with you so I can start harassing you for more. Oops, guess I kinda just did :-)

Wow, 5 chapters, where have I been????

Just loved the \'Wanna touch\' sequence, sooooo enthralling and sexy.....Ooo!

I really appreciate your candid writings on abusive Dominants and was not turned off by the chapter. It made me mad to think that this is prevalent and probably not reported as abuse.

I\'m soooo happy Harry and Severus are getting married, can\'t wait for THAT chapter. The sex they had after the proposal was nerve wracking enough.....OOOO!

I must admit that I\'m one of those people who would wave back at any bikers that would acknowledge onlookers. The roar of the bikes alone is enough to shake the earth and make a heart flutter. I can thoroughly understand why you\'ve put so much raw power into the little town of Sturgis and that Harry can feed off of it. Awe-inspiring!

Doesn\'t everyone hate pushy lawyers? As if conversion was an option!!!!!! How conceited can you be?????

You must post more, this is sooo much an education as it is a great story.

Holy Crap! You made me laugh with that one. Loved the end, nice friction between Harry and Jo. Ooh and I loved the last line, eat love its getting cold. Goodness it was just priceless. I\'d pay to see all three of their faces!

Loved it!! - Jess

Have to say that i love the fic. I love that you are sharing some of what you know in your fic. While I have not experienced some of what I write in my stories (violent rape, fisting, abuse), I do appreciate fics in which the author writes from personally gained knowledge. The Lifestyle has intrigued me many times, being quite the submissive sexually, but I am to mush of an opinionated bitch to submit in the rest of my life. lol.

So, anyway, great fic. I\'m really enjoying reading it.

alright! that was the spit fire Harry I love! But jo gave in to easy.....great story. More please!

I have really enjoyed the story so far. I like Sev\'s whole personallity change, the BDSM aspect and how it\'s written from expirence. Please continue!

Don\'t you DARE stop writing this story! You are giving a realisitc view of the way this type of relatioship should be, and of what happens when it is abused. Frankly I think more people should write this kind of story and then there might not be quite so many idiots out there pretending to know what they\'re doing! You\'ll still get the sick F**ks that powertrip and like to twist true emotion into pain and degredation, but you can\'t cure those that enjoy their illness.

Besides I am very addicted to this story, and if you stop I think I will cry.

Jessie

Please don\'t stop writing this story. I appreciated the last chapter and I think that it was written very well. I think that the depth of the D/s relationship just adds to the story and is very well written while allowing the reader to really get a feeling for the lifestyle that the characters are following. I look forward wtih anticipation as the story continues.

Ooh wow, loved the last three chapters. They were all very sweet. In the first one I loved how Sev took care of Harry once he realized what had happened. The second one I loved too, i swear i was like holding my breath from the time they got to the diner until the end of the chapter, loved how Max and Sev took care of Harry. And just plain out loved the third one! lol

Cannot wait till the next chapter - Jessica (( BTW this is the normal Jessica, i just changed my penname to match other sites ))