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person antipyro
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was f****g hilarious! Harry falling asleep! Definately new sensations and nerve endings working overtime there!!! lol

Your description of their new love making was terrific. I snickered at how Harry informed Severus of the new location to \'touch\' and Severus\' new methods. I was squirming like you couldn\'t believe.

Loved Ron\'s reactions too, absolutely fantastic. Serves him right! I hope he turns 50 shades of red in the morning when he aplogises to Harry.

Can\'t wait to find out what Grant does with Severus....that\'ll be interesting. I hope Severus can get over his embarrassment.

Great chapters and bring on what ever you want, I don\'t expect you to hold back on anything, but the warning was good to know.

Thanks and post soon.
person Lizzie
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is...awesome. I grew up on Harley\'s and so it\'s great to find someone who obviously knows her way around one, as well. I like the way you made the fic about their relationship, not how they got into the relationship in the first place. I like the dom/sub thing. It suits Harry to trust someone so implicably-especially Snape. And although this is a stupid question because by the detail of your story I already know my answer but: I take it you\'ve been to Sturgis a time or ten before? ^.~ Great story...keep up the great work! ^.^
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods I swear Rons suck a dumbarse prick sometimes, love it though! Hermione better whip his bum into shape.

Great idea with the truck! Ooh and there gonna have a little girl!!! Ooh she\'ll be adorable!

Cant wait for the next chapter! Love it!! - Jessica
person Lizzie
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you write Girl!
person antipyro
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the physical changes in Harry. It\'s a new perspective I\'ve never read about before - lol - no wonder!!!!

Great that Hermione is getting Ron to understand but I hope Ron\'s not too horrified by what he hears tonight - should be a very funny chapter.

Post soon, I\'m waiting.
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap I loved the end of the last chapter! Taking down the silencing charms are we? lol

Lovely, as always
person Katharos
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to see how you write what Ron\'s face looks like when he hears Harry and Sev having passionate hermaphradite sex. lol.
person Mirie
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is great!! Ron is such a jerk, you could tell even from J.K.\'s books that\'s an accurate depiction of how he would react to Harry and Sev. Update again soooooon!!!! Pleaaaaaase!!
person Katharos
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol. I love when Ron gets gob-smacked! I also love how Sev and Harry now have a truck. Trucks rock. Trucks and motercycles. They\'re the 2 best vehicles on the planet.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Ron... I wonder how Harry will convince him that Severus isn\'t hurting him.