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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who\'s a pervert? *looks around* LMAO
I love this fic. Each chapter you add more and more depth and intrest to the story. I can\'t wait for more.
I love this fic. Each chapter you add more and more depth and intrest to the story. I can\'t wait for more.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! I know what you mean about poverty, though; a few years back, I was in Florida and we visited an Indian reservation- I was told that it wasa relatively rich one, but some things still shocked me.
I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s so sad. Their living conditions are horrible. At least they have the potions Sev brings for Rachel to keep them from becoming to terribly ill.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Severus\' father is STILL abusing him?! Oh, I hope Orion gets what\'s comming to him very very soon.
Oh, and some more pregnant sex would be good, too. lol
Oh, and some more pregnant sex would be good, too. lol
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, 7 chapters!!!! I only read book 6 for three days and look what I missed.
I\'m really glad that Ron has finally figured out the good in Harry and Severus\' relationship. It was bound to happen, one way or another, lol.
The brutality of Orion\'s actions on Severus seemed to scar the reader in it\'s comprehension. I can\'t imagine wanting that much pain rather than touching yourself. I guess it\'s what we grow up with is what makes us who we are. Eventually, I hope there is a chapter where Orion gets his due, at least in a mention.
The reservation scene is unfortunately typical, and I\'m not lumping all Natives in that group. I can remember visiting a northern Ontario reservation and finding similar squallid conditions, right down to the skinny dogs roaming around, scrounging in their skitterish manner. Almost unreal. Then you see a warm smile from a child and hope is there.
One thing I didn\'t see is the crafts for sale by the women and children of the village, laid out on blankets or makeshift tables at the entrance of the reserve. You can usually pick up some beautifully crafted or beaded work.
I laughed at Harry and Allie bopping with their shades on - cracked me up!
If you haven\'t read book 6, don\'t! It\'s fairly boring, only coming to life in chapter 24, somewhat depressing in all the collected details and suggested outcomes and I have to read it again to fully understand many nuances I probably missed the first time, before I make up my mind to accept the written outcome. See for yourself....
Until then, read this, it\'s much better and happier!
I\'m really glad that Ron has finally figured out the good in Harry and Severus\' relationship. It was bound to happen, one way or another, lol.
The brutality of Orion\'s actions on Severus seemed to scar the reader in it\'s comprehension. I can\'t imagine wanting that much pain rather than touching yourself. I guess it\'s what we grow up with is what makes us who we are. Eventually, I hope there is a chapter where Orion gets his due, at least in a mention.
The reservation scene is unfortunately typical, and I\'m not lumping all Natives in that group. I can remember visiting a northern Ontario reservation and finding similar squallid conditions, right down to the skinny dogs roaming around, scrounging in their skitterish manner. Almost unreal. Then you see a warm smile from a child and hope is there.
One thing I didn\'t see is the crafts for sale by the women and children of the village, laid out on blankets or makeshift tables at the entrance of the reserve. You can usually pick up some beautifully crafted or beaded work.
I laughed at Harry and Allie bopping with their shades on - cracked me up!
If you haven\'t read book 6, don\'t! It\'s fairly boring, only coming to life in chapter 24, somewhat depressing in all the collected details and suggested outcomes and I have to read it again to fully understand many nuances I probably missed the first time, before I make up my mind to accept the written outcome. See for yourself....
Until then, read this, it\'s much better and happier!
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Do please continue it. Please don\'t let book 6 ruin your view of Snape. Thank you.
Always;
J.L.
Always;
J.L.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww ... *tickle fight* god that was adorable .. And ickle Won-Won and Sev-Poo getting along, just love it!
Love it! - Jessica
Love it! - Jessica
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous chapter! I like that way you deal with the abuse issue so tactfully. Grant and Damin are the best!!!! More updates soon!!!
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* God, those last two chapters were precious. Made me cry. Loved it!
Dont worry, I\'ll definitaly still read it! Most definitally! - Jessica
Dont worry, I\'ll definitaly still read it! Most definitally! - Jessica
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, this story just always makes me want to get two things I\'ve wanted since I was a child. 1. A Motorcycle, but I can\'t quite afford one yet. T_T My dad said we could buy ours together someday. 2. A tatoo, but I don\'t know what I want yet.
ANYWAYS, lovely story as always. Please write more soon. And I don\'t care about the details that happened during the sixth book. It\'s all good.
ANYWAYS, lovely story as always. Please write more soon. And I don\'t care about the details that happened during the sixth book. It\'s all good.