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person myniephoenix
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww they are so cute!!
person Moi
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am on some new meds and well I can
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh my gosh. that chapter was absolutley wonderful!

and wow, the part about brad pitt. I swear i dont think i have EVER laughed that hard when reading a fic. \'i am gay after all\', lol holy crap i fell out of my chair! And the part about him having a poster, ooh god i just died.

And the wedding ceremony was absolutley lovely, and the ending of the chapter was remarkably sweet.

I absolutley loved it!!! - Jessica
person DCfern
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the story. I feel so guilty because this is the first time I have reviewed. I have been following the story from the begining. It is so nice to read something that is so original.
person kori
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that this story has kept me entranced the past few days at both work and home. It\'s wonderful. I love the way you handle the D/s relationship. It\'s honest and realistic. As a sub, I\'m glad to see someone portray it well. You\'ve captured the emotions right, especially those of a sub who\'s been abused in the past. The Lakota part is wonderful.. if only the story would go that well. You\'ve written Harry/Severus in such a unique, wonderful way, I can only heap praises. It\'s an original take on D/s Snape/harry and it\'s excellent work.

Keep up the great writing!!!
person myniephoenix
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
as always!! wonderful
person chantalmalfoy
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh... I need some good pain meds (woke up with a toothache)... but vicodin doesn\'t do crap for me anymore. :( The foolish years of college. :)

I like how Grant helped Harry with the \'women rituals\'. Although his mother was a bit harsh...

Thanks for finally explaining the cows. lol.

And, yes! as long as you continue to update this fic, I will continue to read. Update for years, I\'ll still be here. :D
person J.L. Dupre\'
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I happen to think that this is a wonderful story. Do please continue as you can.
Thank you;

J.L. Dupre\'
person Mirie
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You continue to impress me with the cultural facts. I think it\'s great to incorporate that into your Harry Potter universe. Very original, keep the chapters coming!!
person chaos
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you are writing this story just fine ~ I prefer to have a LONG story rather than a few short ones that follow each other. I especially like the Native American blend you have thrown in ~ being half Native American, it is a pleasure to learn more on that culture! Excellent story!