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person Moi
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I saw, driving home through southwestern Indiana today, a tee shirt for the Sturgis rally. It was the first time I\'d seen something for it outside this story! Great chapter, by the way. Made me want to jump my husband. (Always the sign of a good sex scene.)
person NIKKI
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
such a tear jerker, here i am, at work, crying over a story with people looking at me funny........and with a huge grin on my face for the great sex as well.....damn
person antipyro
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, very wise decision not to give them any privacy and to have Harry have multiple orgasms! Brilliant!!

So expertly written with amazing details and realism. No wonder I keep reading this fic.

I laughed at \"Pregnant Virgin\" - lol ....and the hitting his head on the door jamb - LMAO!!!

At first, when you wrote Harry was sooo wet, I thought maybe his water broke, but it\'s wayyyyy tooooo early for that.

and yes, invariably, the necessary washroom trip post coital, especially when pregnant ---- absolutely!

Loved it and want more....Please.
person myniephoenix
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww... that was probably the sweetest fuck i have ever read... wonderful job!
person antipyro
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad you\'re feeling better....and can write more chapters.

Just got caught up on the last 5 chappies - Ooooooo, I\'ve missed out on a lot, but now, NOW - they\'re married - YIPPPEEEE!!!

Excellent wedding ceremony. I wonder if Severus felt more power through him from Harry than vice versa, and could just take it better? I hope that feeling comes out in later chapters.

Yes, please do continue with this fic, and don\'t start another one.

I think most people can identify with the pre-wedding jitters and your depiction of Harry\'s inner turmoil was spectacular. Loved the \'Scooby Doo\' boxers - LMAO! I wonder what cartoon character Harry would wear?? Bart Simpson?? lol

I think we should have some Snarry, now that the wedding and all the preparation is done. It\'s been a while.....don\'tcha\' think??

Please??? Had a great camping trip and am anxious to get back into some serious reading.
person Katharos
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They\'re finally married! I loved the wedding scene, it was sweet. Are Harry and Sev going to have a traditional wedding night though, or is Harry going to sleep through it? lol
person Lizzie
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so great! I think I\'ve reviewed this story once or twice before and I just wanted to let ya know that I\'m still here, eagerly awaiting each new chapter! ^.^ Love it, love it, LOVE IT! ^.^

xoxox,
Liz
person Anonymous
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
best wishes on feeling better
person Mirie
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THEY DO NOT NEED PRIVACY!! Up date soon!!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Privacy!?! PRIVACY!?! I think not! Just because we all enjoy a little romantic sap once and again, doesn\'t mean we don\'t want the smut! lol

Oh, you left out the gifting part. What did Ron and Hermione get for Severus\' family?