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Hahahaha! I can\'t wait till that swine morgan gets what he deserves! why\'d you end the chapter before the naughty scene!!?

Wonderful recovery from the Officer scene.

I love it when Severus is \'gobsmacked\'! I\'m sure he\'ll never consider Quidditch as just a stupid little game again.

I guess there\'s no allowance for Harry\'s hormones and outbursts so that the normal punishments are applied???

I was wondering about the retribution on Morgan and Severus maintaining his low key profile. Thanks for putting in that note.

Hopefully they can get on their way and head to West Virginia the next day. Will Harry\'s money remain as his, or will it become joint property? Will Severus allow him to wholly buy the house? I would think that the normal married rules would apply.

Thanks for the excellent chapter, please, please post more soon.

Oh, Wow! Two whole chapters to read.

Wouldn\'t you know it that Sev and Harry would run into more trouble with Officer Byron Ridell. I\'m glad you included Sev\'s past history here and am anxious to see how they manage. Great snarkiness on Harry\'s part.

I really like Jo Velden, I can see her as a type of guardian angel of sorts. I can imagine her taking the place of Dumbledore in making things happen - legally or within the scrutiny of the law. Please get back to Luke, I want to know more about him. He seems a relishing dish.

Interesting aspect of Deatheaters being a terrorist group, not just a gang. The wristband thing - UGH!! trade one mark in for another....I hope it doesn\'t last long.

Very interesting twist for our pair of travellers. It keeps the story really fresh and alive, almost like real life, but better. I know you\'ll get to more darker areas, but that is also RL. Thanks again for writing such a wonderful tale.

Ah... poor Severus. that sucks.

You did take a long time to update but the names sev made up made up for it!:)

That was sucha cute chapter!! I love how you\'ve made Sev and Harry. Good work!!! Update soon

awwww.... they are so cute together.... :) you make me happy... even with the underlying angst at times.. this story is a light in my day..

AH! Its so...so...adorable!!! Oh man...I want one. Can I have a Severus? Pwease? O man. I live it. *tears* they\'re so adorable. So\'s Harry. He\'s a cute, cept when he\'s all not Harry. I love yer story.

Loved Sev\'s nicknames - They all suite him perfectly - lol!

...and the new toy - I\'m really glad that Severus liked it.

Now that they have started to establish more of Harry\'s parameters, I hope things will settle down. That is until Morgan comes into the picture. I hope Harry doesn\'t have to deal with that and that Severus and Max will \'take care\' of him separately.

Great read, this chapter. Love to read more, as always.

Excellent, now Harry can ask for what he wants, and not get anymore hurt. The big question is will Severus use it? Although it wouldn\'t hurt and Harry could use it on him possibly to show how subdued it is, he may have reservations on the implications of seemingly whipping Harry.

I\'m intrigued. This should get quite interesting.

Please post the next chapter soon.