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I see a thank you is in order, you dealt with my last review quite eloquently. I did however expect a much bigger explotion from Harry, or maybe melt down is a better way to put it. But I think you know what I mean and dont want to read another book so I wont say to much here. Anyway thanks again for the chapter, for both topic and getting it up so soon. See ya next chap.

Hi,
I found a tiny mistake in the last chapter. It\'s the first mistake I found in your whole wonderfull story and I\'m quite a nit-picker, so be proud ;-) You wrote Severus wants to use Okklumency to see Harrys memorys. It should be Legilimency. Okklumency is the art to hide your thoughts.

......and yet closer comes the fateful chapter(s) that will be Morgan\'s undoing.....(hear in the background the theme from \"Jaws\") The audience shudders, anticipating, waiting......not really wanting it to come, but wanting it done.

Oooooo, picking colours - I agree with Harry, orginal is the way to go, especially for this house. Living out in the country, I can feel for how isolated he\'ll be, especially not being able to drive. That stream will wash out at least once a year, stranding him with his little car. Get him a 4 X 4 Jeep!

Just love it, as always.....and yet, I have to wait still more days for some more hp/ss.....(sighs).....

That was wonderful. Thank you so much for the story please update soon. And please don\'t listen to the few idiots telling you to change how you are writing. I check the story too many times a day. Trust me it is great. I have read it more times that almost anything else and more times than any fan fic.

As always, I triumph. I look forward to reading more. Do we get to see more of what the bastard did to Harry via the pensieve memories or?

Very nice, so sweet. But I do have to tell you that now that I am caught up with the story it is KILLING me to have to wait a week for a new update. But alas I know how ones busy life can be. I do have to ask a favor though, I am going away for 10 days next Thursday so if there is anyway you get to post before that I would just love you forever. Now on with the review, I really liked the last two chapters, the only thing concerning me is isn\'t Severus worried about Harry finding out what he is planing or going to do. I agree it is more than justified and it actually scares me to see Severus\'s reaction to seeing what he did to Harry, but everyone knows how \"good\" Harry is. Deep down he can\'t justify killing anyone. Aside from that I would think he would be mad that Sev did it behind his back. I can imagine the break down Harry would have if he came face to face with him, and that might be a got scene, but I still wonder, secrets in a relationship like theirs always end up with bad results don\'t they? What ever your thoughts on this please don\'t do the, he never finds out thing, cause that is just not right. As sensitive as Harry is he would definatly pick up on the fact that something is going on behind his back, especially when Draco and Lucious show up for a \"friendly visit\". Plus I would assume trying to keep it a secret would make Sev a little on edge also. So anyway something to think about anyway. Again if you can update sooner, yeah, if not I\'ll just have to placate myself with Mickey. See ya next chap!

Don\'t you just love the word fop? Anyways, as usual a great chapter. Can\'t wait for that bastard to get what\'s coming to him!

~Smiles~ I have to commend you on how quickly you post your chapters. I have to say you are the very 1st person I\'ve ever seen that does it.

Thank you so much for sharing your delicious story. I look forward to reading each chapter.

Love the chapter in the Dr.\'s office when they listen to the heartbeat. It never seems real until you see the ultrasound or hear the heartbeat - Awesome!

Every chapter you post, I\'m cringing at it to know if this is the one where Morgan will finally get his dues. Ever so slowly and patiently, you\'re teasing us into believing, this is the one. I can\'t help think this is where you might add some additional warnings of graphic scenes of whatever.... I shiver just thinking about it. Brutal stuff! but I love reading this, I want justice too. I just hope that because Harry is in a frail state (so underweight) that he won\'t even get an opportunity to know when Morgan will meet his fate through Severus and/or Lucius, et al.

Oooooo, post soon.

Hey, I just found your story about a week ago and fell in LOVE. I sat down and read the entire thing in just a couple of days, and now am dying for more. Just recently I contacted one of the authurs from this site to complain about the fact that they promised us a sequal and it hadn\'t been produced yet, the reason I made the complaint was that it seems to me alot of the really good authurs seem to have disappeared from this sight and the few that are still around don\'t update regularly anymore. I was getting really frustrated, Fanfic is in a sense my cocaine, I\'m addicted. Plus I\'m big enough to admit that I can\'t write at all, so I depend on the talented to fullfill my need. I don\'t usually read Harry/Snape and to be honest in the begining when I found this one I avoided it like the plague. Well never was I more glad to have been so board one night that I gave it a chance, I even proposed to my husband that we go to Stugis next year, we both love to ride but are not sure if it is our cup of tea, but we may go to see. I love the way you have written this story, this side of Snape makes me want to get rid of Harry and keep him for myself. The whole portrayal of the Sub/Dom situaion is a wonderful insight to their world. Although I know you had Snape address the fact that he doesn\'t think Harry would feel comfortable topping, I would like to see them try or at least have Snape offer once Harry can hold an erection again. It just adds to the careing and equallity of the relationship. If he doesn\'t at least offer its almost like Harry is beneath him so much that he doesn\'t deserve to at least experiance that with the one he loves. I would say so far that is the only addition I would like to see, plus somewhere along the line I would assume there will either be trouble in the relationship between the two or Harry, and also Sanpe, have to get some serious metal help. With all the baggage they can\'t just ignore it and think that love can heal it all, poor Harry is really screwed up, and rightfully so. I love angst so however you prolong it is fine with me. Any way I hope you update regularly I will be checking all the time and I am glad you are in no rush to finish this too soon I wouldn\'t care if it went on for alot longer. But please when it does end, you are a great writer please start another right away. Thanks.