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person Laurels
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. It has a great flow, it is not rushed like many fics are. I also love its natural progression. I always feel like the next chapter will follow on well and that it all makes sense. It is so nice to see a story that is nice and long and yet doesn\'t just waffle. This is so well written and I love reading it. In chapter 81 there is mention of another pregnate man, I have to wonder if we will meet him, I think it would be nice for Harry to have someone around esspacially if Severus goes off to work. I really love this story and I love the fact you update so regullary... I was reading this on TSS (where has that site gone?) but here is just as good, as long as I get my Harry/Sev fix. Great work!
person Threesisters
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feels strange reviewing your story off TSS, but it was a lovely chapter.
Best wshes, still thoroughly enjoying our Harry and Severus, but love the new characters too!
person Ashira
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Found you!!! I had gone into withdrawal.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your hands. Every time the weather changes around here I get a sinus infection. *ugh* So, I can relate a little on how iritating the weather/cold can be with health issues.

Poor Harry. I hope after this dreamwalk stuff he gains a little more confidence.

Also, we haven\'t heard anything else about Severus\' father since the boys came home. Will Severus deal with his \'demons\' sometime, too?
person hpficfiend
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I\'m just in awe of the relationship that you have created between Severus and Harry. It seems almost tangible...absolutely brilliant. I am currently very much anticipating what we find out about Harry in the dream walk. The Harry that you have created is such an amazing mix of completely contradictory characteristics. On one hand he is amazingly strong but on the other he is a weak as a kitten. I\'m looking forward to those chapters in the future when he finally realizes that Severus is going to be there for him always (well he\'d better be!)....

Keep up the great writing (hands willing that is) and I will keep reading. I\'m at home sick from work today (stupid flu) and this definitely helped quell a little of the lying in bed boredom! ~Ally
person Akusaa
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you updated! *happy dance*

Don\'t you dare take so long to post the mindwalk thing or I may be forced to do something...drastic. ^.^ :P

Loved it! This story is so adorable. Can\'t wait for the update!
person myniephoenix
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update... i have been waiting on pins and needles for one from you... much love deartest author..
person Silver
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I can\'t wait for the next one!
person dmalfoy
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad I found this story again! Yay, and I say again, Yay! Your story is so beautifully written. I was quite upset that I couldn\'t get on Silver Snitch.
person cupotrevor
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
worth the wait...another wonderful chapter..really looking forward to the dream walk part..and then on to the \"morgan\'s demise\" part!!!!