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person barbarataku
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As bad as this chapter startss out and as bad as it is going to get, it is still not revenge enough for that kind of mistreatment of anyone. Thanks for let Draco have BALLS enough to at least protect an innocent child. Thanksfor sharing, not this part or the next chapter, sucha warm and wonderfull story. this is Severus as I see himn neither black or white, kind, generous, and willing to defend his own and what is Right. Sounds like she is going to turn him into a petty person.
person kit
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I somehow sense a vindictive streak after that chapter . . . it\'s about time someone put that bastard in his place

Kit
person unbroken_halo
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods, babe how could you leave it there? That was excellent I can\'t wait for the rest. Hope you get to feeling better. Ping me if you need me. Kisses.
person deb
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
got a laugh at the last line like .........christmas goose\"! oh how i laughed anway great story it actually was great shortest chapter ive ever read though but its better than nothing at all ! update soon glad that bastard is getting what is coming to him not he deserves everything he gets!
person Threesisters
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve got tears in my eyes again. My poor Harry, and that Monster, going to sell their child,
Like Harry the next chapter might churn my stomach, but I will read it for him. Does that make
sense.

Sorry to hear you\'ve been poorly.

Best wishes.
person Pease
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It is one of the best written ones I have read with Severus and Harry. I look forward to every chapter you put up. Thank you for the time you have and continue to put into this story.
person MysticSong
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\'Christmas is coming the goose is getting fat....\'



That was quite a good chapter.
person dmalfoy
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Intense chapter. Poor Harry. Hope he and Draco can start to get along better now.
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, something is going to happen isn\'t it? I can feel a storm a-brewing.

I have to say, I love the fact that Harry felt lighter after his Peyote. It helps to let others share the burden. I also love love LOVE the interactions between Sev and Harry when they are alone in their bedroom.

Love it, I tell you!

Good job!
person libldyjean
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have become so attached to this story. being this aware of the guys as they are here leaves me feeling as Grant and Damon must feel on behalf of both Harry and Severus. having LM help this beast get \"what he has comeing\" to him feels right too.
i do get disapointed when i check and there has been no new chapter but i would be more disapointed if you wrote just to post something. thank you for taking the time to post when the chapter is ready content-wise.