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person libldyjean
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you continually astound me. this was so much more than i could have imagined.
again you have given your readers, at least in my opinion, a perfect chapter for this story.
looking forward, as always, to more of this wonderful hp/ss tale.
person gypsy rhodes
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always, GREAT WORK! I know that the boys haven\'t been home from Sturgis that long, but I\'m eager for Harry to get to play with the toys he made while they were gone. I think that Damon and Lucius would hit it off well. They share some personality traits. Is Draco going to decide he wants to be pregnant after being around Harry? I liked the torture scenes, WELL DONE. I hadn\'t thought about vinegar; lemon, ginger, and Habenero peppers played in my fantasies. HMMM... Have to try vinegar! Are we going to see any of Lucius\' Dom side in a personal relationship?

Just curious!!!

Thanx for keeping up the great work!
person antipyro
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes!!! Morgan deserved all that and more. Harry now has closure and can rest his mind.

Absolutely loved the peeled eyelids - lmfao!

I really like the idea that Harry and Draco are friendly. I don\'t think they will be best friends, but comfortable with each other would be great.

I hope Harry thinks to draw a hot bath for Severus, to \'wash away\' all the evil and ills from him, plus all the blood - EWWWWW!

Gotta check out the cookie at LJ.

Just what I wanted.....Ahhhhh.....
person sbkar
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now...Are Lucius and Draco going to transport the remains back to Great Britain or will there be some \"banishment\" going on in West Virginia???
person Hambares
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was as horrific as it should have been! I wish more sexual predators would go that way. But as it is illegal....... Now I hope that all involved, especially Harry, are fine.
person e a smith
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
G-ddamn girl! remind me never to piss you off. love the bit with the stake. buzz me sometime. i could use some help for a torture scene of my own.

elice

person FluffNutter
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um ..... ewww. but he totally deserved it.

Moving right along? ;)
person sheila
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have such a lovely twisted mind. Thank You for updating.
person Threesisters
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright I read for the Harry in my story. My stomach is churning, and my breathing is
Spasmodic, but I stood for my Harry. I have to say honestly, I\'m not sure about yours.

I read it, and even though I feel ill, I just want you to know you\'re absolutely brilliant.

At the moment I feel sick, but also staggered, after reading such a wonderful writer.

Best wishes, always.

Eileen.
person barbarataku
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a well put together chapter. Everybodies role was perfect. Sad to say the funniest part of the whole thing is the 2 of them sitting and chating like it was no big deal and it was time for a snack/tea. Fantastic. Worth a 10 at least.