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I just found your story and you combined two of my favorite kinks in the Harry Potter universe, sub Harry and pregnant Harry. I love how Sev is taking care of Harry.

I hope this will allow Harry to heal. Especially since he now has a real family. I never thought I was particularly cruel, but I couldn\'t help cheering Sev and Lucius. And the break for tea! Superb!

Wow, like seriously, oh my fucking god. I love this fic with a burning passion! It is well written, good plot, and so just right. I was never a Snarry fan before this, but not i have to question that motive. I love how you portry Harry as really being so weak inside, and how Severus is so dominatnt but weak in his own ways. I also love the whole Dom/Sub thing going on, like it\'s sweet, and not too much. I never knew such thing exsisted, but this fic has opened my eyes to a different world. Thankyou for your great writing, please update soon!
Love,
Kim W.
P.S,-Can you please E-mail me when you update? It is a great help, thankyou.

man, that was brutal. i am glad you are giving the boys some happy time next. i look forward to them dealing with Sev\'s issues, and Harry protecting and taking care of him, I\'d like to see that hidden power/strength they keep talking about. I think Grant and all their new friends need to see it. but you are right, they need a break first. keep up the good work.

Oh, my god, you are evil! That was so horrible! Severus and Lucius were so creepy.
Great chapter, as ever, I look forward to more fluffy times between Sev and Harry.
Keep up writing!
Ciao, Domaris

I don\'t know whether I should be happy or disgusted with that chapter. I hate to admit it, but I was laughing through parts. Not that I
shold be happy that someone is being tortured, but, well, Morgan deserved it. Your descriptions of what they were doing were absolutely
horrific, and had I been watching a movie I might have thrown up, something that I never do no matter how bad the scene is. This time,
however, I almost did. And while I was completely disgusted by what they were doing, I was also extremely pleased that Morgan was
finally dead, and that Severus was taking care of Harry. I\'ve read so many stories where Harry\'s been abused (but never this badly),
and he always begs Sev not to hurt those who hurt him (usually the Dursleys). I was happy to see Harry\'s reaction. I don\'t know what I
would do in his situation or how I would feel, but you\'ve done a great job of showing us what happened. I loved how Sev and Lucius
were drinking tea while they were covered in blood. I wouldn\'t be able to do that, but then again I wouldn\'t be able to torture someone
no matter what they did. Well, maybe if I had kids or someone I really really loved, but right now I can\'t imagine doing that. I applaud
Severus and Lucius. I\'m also glad that Harry and Draco seem to be getting along better. I look forward to more soon!

Just been reading this after it was rec\'d on snape_potter lj. Have got up to part 38, want to read on by my eyes are getting sore, LOL! I will be reading more later though.

What a wonderful, in depth story. I\'ve written a couple of D/s stories, but mine are totally from my imagination and what I\'ve read (so I may have got it totally wrong, LOL!), so it was nice to see a story from someone who knows what they were writing about. I\'ve never been on a motobike in my life, or had a tattoo and the only thing pierced were my ears, but you described everything in such detail that it was easy to imagine. Lovely.

Snape. On a motorbike. Snape & Harry on a motorbike. Drool :-)

Take care,
Annette
(eriador117)

Oh my god, this chapter was blood-chilling. I\'ve read my fair share of torture fics in the past, but I have to tell you, I got a little queasy at the part where they removed his eyelids. I KNEW I was in trouble...... But I read anyway.... But the stake.....sweet jesus, the stake..... And the fact that that they sat down to tea afterwards. I could picture it so clearly, sitting down, covered in blood and goo, and having a civilized cup-of-tea as if they\'ve just returned from the gentlemans club.

I couldn\'t tear my eyes away.

Sinister, but I must admit, he had it coming..... I\'m just wondering if his \"clients\" will find someone else to retrieve the baby that they wanted.

Excellent! Totally worth waiting for. ~Grins~

...OOooohhh..... ouch. I had trouble reading some of that... Way to go! That was aweosme, dude!!!!!!!!! Yay! Taylor\'s dead! I was scared that you might do this thing where he was able to break free and grab hold of Harry again, but I\'m much more ahppy with this.