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poor draco....he should invest in ear plugs..another wonderful chapter..i do so look forward to seeing more of this amazing story!

Loved it. That scence was HOT!!!

So I tried to review this a while ago while on my handheld, but it ate the post, and I was too tired to do it over again. Then I forgot, and then TSS went down and yeah. Anywhoo.

It actually took me a while to start reading this story. Cause I was like, Snape, on a motorcycle, whatever. But then I finally went ahead and was like, what the heck lets read it and see what its like. And its good. I really do like it. I also like the fact that I know it will go on for so long, cause I find it annoying how sometimes some stories would be so much better if only they would continue past the point they were ended at. It is also interesting to see how the lifstyle they are living is written. As you said in one chapter, there are so many stories out there that are written with this sort of relationship, that give people the wrong idea, and I think that its good that you can write how things really are. Not that it is a lifestyle that I would choose, but it is interesting to see how it works.

So yeah. I think that this is a really good story, keep writing it, and I shall work on catching up on it real quick. I\'m actually back in chapter 75 or so.

excellent wonderful more please!! lots lots more

hey! i\'m really enjoying this story (and have been for a while) i don\'t usually review unless it\'s to critique, but reading this chapter i was struck by a thought - are damon and grant going to really adopt severus in this fic? i\'m actually an adoption clerk in a county court in pennsylvania and just today i processed an adult adoption. and reading this chapter it just really struck me how much like family they really are, so why shouldn\'t they make it offical? they probably couldn\'t until after sev\'s cleared to live here, but i think it would make sense for them to at least offer, or maybe for the laywer ckick to bring up.

and now harry is going to get in touch with his slytherin side and get sev wrapped alittle more around his little finger...
amazingly wonderful chapter..i love the way your story flows..as usual awaiting updates...

Sometimes real life gets in the way. I hope things will ease up for awhile before you have to tackle the next groupings of REALITY. Many stories feel complete when the action is over and they are together in some fashion. Sometimes you feel the need for more than that and this is one of those stories. All good things must come to an end or they will get boring, but I would like to see at least the issue of Sev\'s father delt with. I like the way you have treated the characters by making them react in away that makes sense to me. I can see Lucius conviniencing the WW that he was not really that bad, although I am really hoping Arthur gets a chance to do him in. I was not sure how I would deal with the Dom/Sub issue but since it is not a MAJOR issue it was fine. What ever the on between consenting adults is their business, as long as it is not abusive, if it works for them is OK. Many Het relationships do not have as clearly defined rules and are clearly abusive. In my mind, your writing and plot creating skills and best of all your updating schedule have truly inhanced the Harry Potter Universe. Thank you for sharing this with us.

I read this really early this morning and couldn\'t review because the site was updating. I love the gentle understanding Harry and Sev have; it shows even better how the trip through Harry\'s memories helped.

Sorry I havent been reviewing. Stressed. But still loving your story so much!

YESSSS!!! An update! Thank you!!! As usual it was brilliant, please keep this going as long as you want.