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Merlin! So hot!!! I love this story more with each chapter and I didn\'t think that was possible!

I know that this will probably get lost in the wash of \'you walk on water\' reviews... but I honestly think that you\'ve destroyed Harry here. He\'s no longer himself, no longer the Harry we all know and love. You\'ve mentally and physically turned him into a girl, at best, a Mary Sue at worst. Both he and Severus are horribly and patently OOC and this should be marked as such. The D/s is, I suppose, well done, although too strict for my taste, at least it isn\'t Gorean. And at 89 chapters and still going, it\'s too daunting for someone just clicking on it.

I\'ve only read a few chapters of your story so far, but I wanted to say that I really enjoy it. I like how you show BDSM differently than is normally done. I personally have no idea what it is like, but I like the way you present it.

That was so hot!! Absolutely brilliant. It\'s my favourite story and it just gets better.
It was so hot, it\'s 10.30 pm. I have had half a bottle of red, (good red) have seen
the GOF and now your story. I think I will go and grab hubby for a energetic night.

Best wishes, hope your hands are better,
Threesisters, Eileen.

YOU are FABULOUS!! :)

OMG.........that was soooooo hot......very well written and stayed in the context of everything you have taken time to build, the established relationship, the wild sex, the weird sex, the need harry has to be filled to busting (as in an earlier chapter with the inflatable plug!).....i am so excited that you did that scene as almost no writer will approach it but will do just about anything else......one question.....when do we get to see the toys that harry made?

Oh. Dear. G-d! I\'m SO glad that 2/3 of my children are at their aunts.... *pants*

*Rolling around on her bed cracking up with laughter* Oh... OH MY GODS THAT WAS HILLARIOUS! Poor pooor Malfoys. XD Should Gwampa help daddy with the celibacy issue? LOL

Ohhh poor Draco needs ear plugs! Great job as always!!! Thanks for updating.

That was hot as hell, and then end was funny...
I seriously can not wait for more
Chow for now!