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person Nightwing
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter :-)
i've been checking every day, lol...
i love this story sigh...
the harry and draco bonding was cute...
Can't wait for more,
Chow for now!
person Mimiheart
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Draco/Harry bonding. :D
person DraykaEmrys
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I hunted you down here from HP Fandom, because the chapters there weren't enough.

Just one little question about this...um...didn't Harry learn to cook when he was forced to play House Elf to the Dursleys? What happened to that? Though I know
JKR only shows him cooking breakfast...but still, it implies that they had him cooking a lot.

Otherwise, I'm REALLY enjoying this. PLEASE keep updating.
person dmalfoy
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always. A nice, refreshing interlude between Harry and Draco also. Nice touch.
person miyuki
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you've made a mistake in the addy it's given as http://www.livejournal.com/community/stir_of_echo/ tHe STIR_OF_ECHO would stirS_of_echo (missed the "S" in stirs)

Anyway the chapter is grwat as usual.

Miyuki
inuchanpuppy@yahoo.com
person sbkar
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how you entered the new year on such a high note! You've given Harry and Draco a connection while working in the humanity of parenthood. Can I be you for a bit?

Sweet...Thank you so much...Talk about an Epiphany!
person angel
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great and hmm draco taking cooking class and now she is giving them to harry that is sooo sweet i love it ...please please more more i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
person Aimsir
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've finally pin-pointed the main problem in your writing: your characters aren't real. They feel artificial and the corner-stone of any story is the characters, as all writers know. I've seen some of your responses to criticism, so I'll go against my usual behaviour and not give any constructive advice. If you want to develop yourself as an author, you'll have to learn how to take negative as well as positive criticism. (Misspelled insults without arguments to back up opinions are another matter altogether.) I have no desire to insult or hurt you, so please don't be offended.

Aimsir
person Donavon
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know your story just like a good recipe, full of wonderful things that come together
in your mind and are served up for our enjoyment.

Thank you for another fruitful course. Loved Lucius.

Happy and Hopefully a healthy New Year.
person spinstergp
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful fic. I have enjoyed watching the relationship between Severous and Harry develope. I hope you continue it.