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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that there are still some readers out here who would very much like to read some more of this amazing, wonderful, fabulous, heart-capturing fic. Please. :)
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I love this story I have read it 160 times now I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story and I cant wait for more.
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December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have notice that sometimes in your story your dialogues are very confusing at times. In some place the the person answers to a question or reply on the first thing that is said/asked. But in other place you actually gets it right like in this place in chapter 114.
"No, if we use magic, it won't taste the same." "I can't wait until we have kids, you know, but it'll mean Gregory will have to take a break from medicine. Do you still fly? I mean obviously not now, but when you aren't pregnant." (Davy)
And the harry answers.
"I think that's the first thing I am going to do after I deliver Reganne. Well that and take another ride on Sev's cycle." Harry grinned and then pouted. "I understand; I want it to taste the best. I have to eat something. Would you like a peanut butter and jam sandwich? I need to see if Sev would like something, too."
Here Harry answers to the last question that left Davy, in my opinion this is how a person usually answers. If you now would do that in the rest of the story.
Otherwise i love your story, just wish you would hurry up and update.
"No, if we use magic, it won't taste the same." "I can't wait until we have kids, you know, but it'll mean Gregory will have to take a break from medicine. Do you still fly? I mean obviously not now, but when you aren't pregnant." (Davy)
And the harry answers.
"I think that's the first thing I am going to do after I deliver Reganne. Well that and take another ride on Sev's cycle." Harry grinned and then pouted. "I understand; I want it to taste the best. I have to eat something. Would you like a peanut butter and jam sandwich? I need to see if Sev would like something, too."
Here Harry answers to the last question that left Davy, in my opinion this is how a person usually answers. If you now would do that in the rest of the story.
Otherwise i love your story, just wish you would hurry up and update.
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know I really love this story, and have been waiting for almost 4 months now for the update. Is everything alright? I really hope to see a new chapter soon, This is the story I have read from almost the beginning.
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i can't wait to read more of your story mika-chan
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmm i am waiting for e new chapter
this is so a good story and i love it but now i am waiting for
the next chapter please post ssooooooooooooooooooooooooooonn
bye bye
a huge fan
this is so a good story and i love it but now i am waiting for
the next chapter please post ssooooooooooooooooooooooooooonn
bye bye
a huge fan
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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is addiciting and i love it cant wait for the rest of it
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so amazing, I only found it last week and spent all week reading. Of course I was interrupted by work but really enjoyed it. I was wondering what happened to the photo album Draco rescued from Morgan's place. He was so disturbed by the place he had his father obliviate him, did he forget he had it? Also, the presents under the tree. Harry and Severus have become a little complacent if they were not checking the presents for spells and curses as soon as they realized neither of them put the presents under the tree. I really love what you have done with the characters and your new characters are really good too. Can't wait for the next chapter to come up!!!!!
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Everyone is happy and horny, just the way they should be! :) Richard and Jason are moving in together!!! I can't wait for some more action between those two! :) You guys rock! I hope RL calms down for the two of you sometime soon. :)