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Now, why does Sev have those things in his house? And, just what do they have to do with Orion Snape?

Wow, intense. Now that Morgans gone, I don't suppose Damon and, maybe, Lucius could have a "word" with Orion Snape? I'm sure we'd all be willing to help. This story is so real to all of us, we can hardly wait to se "what happens next"...Blessed Be-Roberta

This was beautiful. I admire you for having created a whole world with this fic and I'll make sure to check your LJ comm.
Damon and Grant are totally cute together, even when fighting. Beautiful love-making down at the creek.
All those people truly behave like one big family. Sev trying to play Quidditch with cutlery was hilarious, especially when Harry corrected him. Closely followed by Lucius' skinny-dipping.
Keep going, this was and still is wonderful!

man ..... why would harry think sev would use that on him .... please please please update soon i would lvoe to read more ..later for now

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I don't know who to be more scared for...Severus or Harry. Harry reverted right back to his days of captivity with Morgan. And Severus now has to answer for having kept the box. He will be in an awful lot of trouble with Damon and Grant (rightfully so). Please let them work it all out.

I love this story, Merlin knows you must realize I do, with all the times I've told you.
However, sometimes I read a chapter, which hurts me, and I finially have the courage to
ask. Where is the joy, not just the contentment which is shown via most of the characters.
Nontheless, theres such an undercurrent of sadness that seems to be seeping and taking
control.

I made a conparison in another review, to you making a recipe, and us enjoying the results,
today I feel as though the mixture has become unstable, it needs something to bring the
recipe back into a mixture that will work.

If I wasn't dyslexic I would think of the word I want, such as making a holendaze sauce, and it curdles and
needs something to bring it back so the mixture is not split.

However Best wishes, it just could be my dyslexia making me confused.

I have been obsessed with this story for nearly a week now. Every few hours I come back to reread something. This story is definitely one of the best I've read, the characters may not be the same as in the books, but they have a very real texture to them that just makes the whole deal better. I look forward to future chapters!

Great story. Didn't mind the change of view, actually enjoyed it. Update.

I've been following this story for a long time now and just wanted you to know that this was a great chapter. Yes it was different, but it was nice to get to know some of the people that are so important in sev and Harry's life. I was somewhat confused by Damon and Grant's interaction for parts of it though. Perhaps it's just because this is our first real look at them as a couple, but at times I just didn't get why they were acting like they were. With Sev and Harry we've seen the development of a lot of their relationship so I had a better understanding for why they might be upset with each other. Grant's mood swings were a bit harder to get at first, but by the time I was finished I felt like I knew and understood them a bit better.

Yeah and all that rambling was just to say that I liked the chapter. Thanks for updating.

What a great chapter! I get tired of too much action and like to learn a bit more about the people themselves. This section is so homey that it feels like family and thus making this story more real. I am glad you are finishing this and I am doublely glad that I continued reading about this different lifestyle, at least to me. Hope you are feeling well and that when you end this story you have another inside raring to go. Thanks for sharing.