rate_review Reviews

Wow that's a new side to Max! Everyone has their limits. Too bad the nice dinner she made went to waste. Great job!

I really just want to congradulate you on how well youve kept this story going. Most stories I read get very boring after a time but you've managed to capture my extremely short attention span, as well as having me eagerly waiting your next chapter. I read more fanfiction about harry potter than I care to admit, but I really thought you'd like to know I think your a fabulous writer. I guess thats it but if you want to reply feel free to email me.

The Toe

wow this is an amazing good story
i really love this one,the realtionschip between the young man and the new family.
it was very nice to read that serveus had a new fanily and that everyone has his issues but alo that they can deal with thse issues. i also love that the old family and the new family gats along, especially the malfloys i find funny.
and now white the two new man, i want to new theire backround, what happen several years ago. and what up the other pregnant guy, will we see him again,...
KEEP WRITING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE

That was a really sweet chapter!
Since you have the next 2 chapters outlined, they will be posted shortly, right? ::raises eyebrows:: You readers will love you forever if you do that! hinthint
Great job! Keep writing!

I love this story a lot. I read it through and i'm curious about something, in the D/S lifestyle is it a game, or what? Some places on the web say it's a game and some say it's not soI thought you might know. I hope that's not a rude question, if so sorry. But i must say your story has me very curious about this type of life style. How on earth did you get to meet people who are Dominant and Submissive? Please email me with the answers if i'm not being to offensive.
Thanks,
Nena

wow, seriously cute. like i said i love every and all chapters of this book. even the sad ones.

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY. IT WAS ON FANFICTION.COM A YEAR OR SO AGO AND I HAD BEEN UP TO I THINK CHAPTER 32...BUT I WENT BACK THE NEXT DAY AND IT WAS GONE!!! AND EVER SENCE THEN I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR IT. IM SO GLAD I FOUND IT. BUT BOY THERE WAS ONLY ABOUT 50 CHAPTERS WHEN I LAST SAW IT. SO NOW I HAVE SOME MAJOR READING TO DO. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! IT WAS THE FIRST STORY THAT GOT ME STARTED ON HARRY AND SEV STORIES. AND IT GOT ME INTO BIKES TOO. I WAS LISTENING TO BOB SEGER AND I WAS READING THE CAHPTER..I THINK IT WAS THIS CHAPTER...WHERE SEVERUS HEARD THE SONG AND STARTED TO SING ALONG...ISNT THAT FUNNY?!?!? I'M GLAD I FOUND THE STORY NOW THEN BEFORE...I THINK I WAS TOO YOUNG TO UNDERSTAND IT...BUT NOW I UNDERSTAND IT PERFECTLY. IT WAS ALSO BECAUSE THIS STORY I STARTED TO WRITE SEV AND HAR STORIES. IM SO GLAD THAT YOUR THE AUTHOR OF THIS STORY...YOU PUT SO MUCH TIME AND EFFORT INTO MAKING THE STORY REALISTIC, FROM YOUR EXPIRENCE.AND I LOVED HOW YOU SAID THAT YOUR BOY TAKES GOOD CARE OF YOU AND YOU TAKE GOOD CARE OF HIM IN YOUR AN. IT SHOWS THAT YOU USE SOME OF YOUR OWN PERSONAL EXPIRENCE TO MAKE THE STORY 100 TIMES BETTER. I LOVE THE STORY..THE PLOTT...THE SETTING..AMERICA. I LOVED THAT HARRY WAS GOING ON VOCATION WITH SEVERUS TO THE STATES...I LOVE HOW POSSISIVE SEV GETS..ITS REALISTIC. AND STILL VERY INTIMATE AND PERSONAL. dON'T EVEN GET ME STARTED ON YOUR WRITING. ITS FLAWLESS. IT MAKES READING IT 10 NO 50 TIMES BETTER. I'VE ALWAYS IMAGINED SEV AND HAR PREGNAT WITH A LITTLE GIRL, SO IM VERY PLEASED YOU DID THAT. AND ABOUT HARRY BLANKING OUT THAT WAS VERY WELL WRITTEN. MY GOSH I COULD GO ON AND ON ABOUT THIS STORY. BUT I HAVE TO GO EAT DINNER. SO SEEYA, KAT

hi there...i have spent the past few days doing nothing but reading this story...omg it is so wonderful...i love the characterization and making d/s something more than just a freaky kink...lol...there's only one thing i don't like about this story and that is the potential for sev to bring someone else to their bed...i am so biting my nails waiting for the next chapter...please hurry...what a fantastic story...keep up the good work...

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love ur story u have got to post a new chappie soon. It's the fist one i look for when i log on the site.

Hi I was just reading this chapter and thought you might like to know that unless you live in Qubec very few Canadians speak French. I know tons of Canadians and most of them would rather eat shit than learn French.