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schedule July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey sevs_lil_secret

I really enjoy reading this story. But since i have seen and heard what Severus father has done to him. I am waiting for his appearance in the story. Or are you going to just have him mentioned here and there throughout the story cause i want to see
how everybody acts around him especially Severus Grant, and Damon. I would also love to see how Harry reacts to Severus's past.
So i am hoping i hear back from you on this matter. I am hoping and waiting for Topias Snape or Orion Snape whatever you want to
call him make his appearance.

Great story. Keep up the good work.
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter 13, and I have got to tell you, you have the right of it. Too often peeps think the Lifestyle is something to use to beat people down with, to lord it over them, make themselves powerful. Thank you for showing the aftermath of a 'Dom' that didn't know how to treat their sub right.
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story and had hoped you would continue it if you could.
person julieqt2
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this thankyou
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey I noticed that on the Silver Snitch II you have chapters 135 and 136 posted. I was wondering if you were going to start posting here too. I really loved this story and would love to see it continue.
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been a very long time since your last update. I am very very sad to see this fic come to an end... I really wish you would continue...
person Makovaso
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it, please update soon.
person Aalto
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I simply love this story! I started reding it a long time ago, but lost sight of it at one point and now I'm back on it again. I hope Jason and Rich are going to get together, Jason needs someone to take care of him and the kids. And I can hardly wait for Harry to give birth...!

You write very well, the characters are interesting and the storyflow is smooth. Though I am wondering are you gonna get anywhere with the thing about Orion Snape... I would sure love to see Harry turn him say, into a toad, for what he did for his Sev.

Anyhow, have a lovely spring and keep up the good work!
person toads70
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey Kel :) i read this story on another site and just loved it, hope you write some more for it! love you, love your story :)
person cumlover
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wat ever happened to jaime and evan and the other couple after they left sturgis we never heard about them again