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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. i know this story is so long, and it's amazing. but update soon.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH! i thought allie was one of the good people!...
cool...though...new chappie?..woot!
cool...though...new chappie?..woot!
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please post another chapter soon! I absolutely love this story. All of the characters are so well-developed and the fact that you spell words correctly and use proper grammar makes this story great to read.
I really want Max to snap out of it and take Allie to task. I think she needs to be taken down a couple pegs.
Please, please, please keep writing!
I really want Max to snap out of it and take Allie to task. I think she needs to be taken down a couple pegs.
Please, please, please keep writing!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story.
I just wonder how Harry is going to take it when he see Davy for the first time.
His thoughts of not feeling worthy of Severus could come to the surface. I just hope Severus can help him though it.
You are doing a great job.
I can not wait for the next chapter.
I just wonder how Harry is going to take it when he see Davy for the first time.
His thoughts of not feeling worthy of Severus could come to the surface. I just hope Severus can help him though it.
You are doing a great job.
I can not wait for the next chapter.
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Turning out a bit to weird. Personally, I would like a bit more of Draco and Lucius in this story. Perhaps about how Lucius hunts for Percy... (evil grin)
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't get Ally. She seemed alright in Sturgis but in the last couple chapters she's been a right bitch. I understand about the pregnancy mood swings, and I sympathize with being the only girl in a group of guys but some of the stuff she said to/about Severus was absolutely horrid and she's all put out that people are mad at her? I'm afraid it's only going to get worse once she finally processes that their circle of associates has increased by another gay couple, and that her husband will be regularly working around a former lover.
If Ally can't deal with Max's adopted family, why did she marry him? On the other hand, that keeping Sarah away from her seems like hitting below the belt.
Methinks, Ally needs to get herself a group of girl-friends to decompress with.
If Ally can't deal with Max's adopted family, why did she marry him? On the other hand, that keeping Sarah away from her seems like hitting below the belt.
Methinks, Ally needs to get herself a group of girl-friends to decompress with.
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow very very good and let ally play a good wife for a change
keep going and post soon
bye bye
keep going and post soon
bye bye
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. This has to be my all-time favorite fanfic and you're not even done yet!
Do I sense some foreshadowing with the "happy gay family" thing? Is Max going to finally kick out Allie and settled down with someone else? Perhaps, (dare I say it) with Greg and Davy as a threesome? Honestly, Allie needs to go. I don't care where or what she takes with her (actually preferably with nothing, she's a major biatch), I just want her gone. Max deserves so much better. Eagerly waiting for the next great update!!
Keep writing!!!
Do I sense some foreshadowing with the "happy gay family" thing? Is Max going to finally kick out Allie and settled down with someone else? Perhaps, (dare I say it) with Greg and Davy as a threesome? Honestly, Allie needs to go. I don't care where or what she takes with her (actually preferably with nothing, she's a major biatch), I just want her gone. Max deserves so much better. Eagerly waiting for the next great update!!
Keep writing!!!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love this story
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I have to feel so sorry for Allison, Sebastian knew what she was like during her first pregnancy, yet,
didn't make sure she didn't get pregnant again. Oh I know he sort of asked her, I just think she went along with his wants. My hormones were so high during pregnancy I trashed the whole kitchen. She is his sub, no one elses, why should she bow down to the others. If that was my situ I would be long gone.
I do not know if you believe in what your writing...or whether you are just elasticating the story to make it go longer. Whatever the last chapter is so wrong. The Dom punishes, no one else. He should also bare the blame for getting her pregnant again.
He should insist on a pre- inducement and pray she forgives him for bringing their problems into the comunity. After all she didn't want to go to the bloody dinner anyway.
Has for harry it's about time she shook off the last destructive story and got on with Severus.
didn't make sure she didn't get pregnant again. Oh I know he sort of asked her, I just think she went along with his wants. My hormones were so high during pregnancy I trashed the whole kitchen. She is his sub, no one elses, why should she bow down to the others. If that was my situ I would be long gone.
I do not know if you believe in what your writing...or whether you are just elasticating the story to make it go longer. Whatever the last chapter is so wrong. The Dom punishes, no one else. He should also bare the blame for getting her pregnant again.
He should insist on a pre- inducement and pray she forgives him for bringing their problems into the comunity. After all she didn't want to go to the bloody dinner anyway.
Has for harry it's about time she shook off the last destructive story and got on with Severus.