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person Anon
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! How fucking terifying!!!! I have never been so scared of a story in my life. and im worried that harrys baby isnt severus'. omg i cant wait to read the next chap.
person Shiva
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! A bit of a cliffhanger but I'm just glad that you updated. So relieved that Greg and Davey finally caught up with everyone else, the tension was building up so much. I love everyone's reactions, so funny.
Keep writing!!!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally, I am all caught up again. :D

I love this fic! And I am SO glad to hear that you don't plan on ending it any time soon.

I can't wait to find out what happens at dinner!
person l'etje
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this was a wonderful chapter and the ending was super!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep going and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person shi21890
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I first started to read it I did not like it much.I did not like the way you had Harry being a slave and
scard of every thing.But the more I read the more I like it. I had a idale on your next chapter.You could have Harry to start to wender if his relationship with Sev is what he hope it was or was he just being a subatute for Davie.
person love2bug63670
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, god I love this story. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
person Mandy
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it, i am excited that you have posted! hope fully they will come more quickly??
person Mya
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was bloody brilliant! I can't wait for the next one, that was seriously a twist I had not expected in the slightest. Well done!
person hoTfoRseV
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Keep going! I so love this! I like totally gasped and squealed!
person Cassy Black
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BTW....am I the only one that is looking at HBP like it is crappy fanfiction that needs to be clicked? your not the only one. great story.