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person Ravynsword
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I came into this when you were at 108 chapters and have just burned through it to catch up. Your story line is addictive and the characterizations have been well thought out and fit well into the plot line. I am looking forward to seeing what the teaming of Lucius Malfoy and the Weasley Brothers will be up to. I am also interested in where the story line with Max and Allie is headed. Keep up the great work and good luck on the surgery.
person Kelly Zuerlein
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story! Will be waiting for the next chapter.
K.
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the story. This is the longest fanfic I ever saw. I really liked the story also I had my doubts when I began, I'm not interessted in motorbikes at all. The characters you created yourself seam to be so real becouse you gave so many informations about them.
person spintergp
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. Wonderful as always.
person Shiva
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update!
I'm glad that Davy and Harry were attempting to become friends. Now I'm really interested in Davy's past with Severus. A possible divorce, huh? Well, I was slightly expecting that. Can't say that I'll really mind since Allie has been such a prick of late. Although I would hope that you would have Sarah remain with Max. She is really sweet.
I hope that everything goes well with your surgery.
Great job!
person Anitajane
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
get well as fast as you can and I hope it all goes well for you in hospital. My prayers and best wishes are with you.

ps love the chapter
person L'ETJE
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a wonderful chapter, please write an other before you go to the hospital.
good luck and recover quikcly from you surcury
bye bye
person Kay
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person barbarataku
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the heads up about posting. Seems to me you did an excellent job of getting chapter 111 correct. I think this story is like Harry Potter and the...... The plots are so well written that they grab your attention and make you so interested that one wishes to know what they had for breakfast and just what will happen next. Sometimes no action is needed so you can rest for the next batch. It is amazing how two such Heroic Figures can be so insecure. I feel as if you have developed their characters the way the really would be if they existed. Harry looking for love in all the wrong places being desperate and truly believing however he was treated was the best he deserved. After dealing with his father, Voldy, and Albus in subservience no wonder he has a need to DOMINATE. Remember, something really horrible for dad. As much as we love the Holidays, they can be a lot of work. Wishing you and yours a fantastic Holiday Season. It is getting to be a pain trying to make statements and not offend someone, you just do not know how to say it. Good luck with your surgery.
person barbarataku
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just doing a reread on this while killing time at work. Wanted you know how much I appreciate the work you have put in on 110 + chapters of what has turned out to be a favorite story,except for what was done to Harry. I really liked the way they got him back though. He must have done that to other lovers. Hope you are doing well and have tons of plot bunnies running around in your head. Thanks again for sharing.