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person Jennifer
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I felt like this chapter came faster. It was a good chapter. I just with there was a bit more harry and serverus. If you can put more of them in the story that would be aweomse! but as of course it is up to you. It is just a suggestion. anyway I look forward to reading the next chapter!

Jen =)
person Ladieraie
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Mean of you to end it there though...LOL Here I am, sitting here just on the down side of stomach flu and what do I read? Someone throwing up....I DO believe that I have had enough of that in the last few days and DIDN'T need to read about it. UGH! I have been thinking all along that Allies actions have been caused by something from her pregnacy. If she is toxic in some way, it can cause her to act eratic and such. Of course...only time will tell. I plan of giving her a benifit of the doubt and wait and see. Only our esteem writer knows for sure. :)
person l'etje
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow very very good keep going and post
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
person Kelly Zuerlein
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the new chapter loved it as much as the rest. I hope that this is not the start of allie or the baby being lost may not like how she has been acting but would hate for something bad to happen to either of them. To bad Max never worked out his feelings before starting the next relationship hope he can make it into just friends. You can love someone as a friend after being inlove with them if you are a big enough person.
K.
person morganlefay1958
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter! Pregnancy hormones are absolute hell!! Don't let RL get you guys down and hope everything goes ok!!
person Briar
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love invisible kool-aid!
person Anitajane
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the saga and was delighted to see the new chapter. I hope things improve health wise soon.
person Shiva
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweetness, an update!
Both Harry and Allie get sick on the same day, sheesh, the tension just went about tenfold there; especially concerning that last line about "Max having feelings for Gregory and Gregory having to combat his own feelings for the big Healer". Oh noes, I smell drama in the air! ::smirk::
Great chapter. Keep writing.
person Kelly Zuerlein
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon please so want to know what is going to happen next.
K.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. I hope your surgery goes well.