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PLEASE PLEASE kill off that manipulative little bitch. Max deserves sooooo much better.

I open this up, thinking "This is just going to be cliche crap" (no offense!), but then I actually, you know, read it. O_o Officially my favorite Sev/Harry story on here. And definitely my favorite D/s story there is! Just because no one portrays it like reality. I think I want to hit Allie *slaps my wrist* bad me. I shouldn't think such mean thoughts. Actually, I wouldn't mind yelling at Max... He's still a married man! *shakes head*

Anyway, what was I saying? Oh, yes. I read all 113 chapters in 4 days (technically only 3 days, but there you have it), and when I got to the end I was thinking "that's it? I need more!". Yes, I have become addicted. I'm in the Lifestyle too, by the way, and few people actually know, I think... Heh. But, that's why I am enjoying this story so much, because it's so realistic, in my mind, then most others I've read, especially on here.

So keep up the wonderful story, and I will be checking often for updates!

I really really love this story and wait for every installment with bated breath. I hope it keeps on for a very long time yet. Just one thing though, you really need to kill Allie off, she is a major BITCH pain in the ass. There has to be someone waaaaay better for Max out there who would be happy to take on him and two kids. I hope Harry's thanksgiving dinner goes well, and nothing explodes, lol. Can't wait for the next chappie.

I am loving this story and that is saying something because i usually don't like AU at all.
But you've done something really spectacular here creating original characters that we care about and weaving an interesting plot.

Things i would love to see from your genius
1) for you to pursue severus's issues with his father (which you've already promised you would do!) so please do!
2) i would love to see dumbledore back in the picture and redeemed in severus's eyes and perhaps some fatherly-ness from him. he might even help with sev's real dad
3) i'd love to see max sleep with greg....this might even drive davy to TRY to sleep with severus for revenge.
4) you've mentioned this play party thing too often to not do it and it sounds awesome. the scene you wrote where sev and harry were getting it on in front of grant/damon was totally hot. more!!! i doubt harry would feel ready to be so exposed and used in front of strangers but he might consent to having those limits pushed in front of people he trusts. how about a private play party with the cast of characters you have. regardless, i want some exhibitionist sex. please

amazing amazing job with this
keep it up

I'm so relived that Kellie is recovering. Hopefully she won't be out of commission for too long.
Well, Harry's Thanksgiving experince will certainly be different. o.O The anticipation is so intense. This chapter was well-written as always. Max and Allie... they're not going to last long with the way Max's mindset is going. Personally, I really don't like Allie anyway so ::shrugs::
Keep writing.

this was soooooo good i really liked it
keep going and post soon
bye bye

Loved it can't wait for more. so loved the knock me up saying that was good.
Glad to hear things are going good for Kelly
K

Wonderful as always. I hope that you are on the mend soon. Take care.

Would you please put bottom!name in the summary or warnings, because I don't read fics in this pairing that don't explicitly state dom!Harry (since they tend towards the other nearly exclusively), so I was just wondering if I'm missing out on something I would enjoy.

I normally don't like Sev/Harry, but I say a nice long story and thought i would try it out. Now I love it, and can't wait for more chapters to your story.