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I must say that was an unexpected twist but perhaps for the best.

this very very sad, i feel so sad for max whow can she do that to him and her children?
abd i also hope that grant and harry become friends again and harry,davy and grant can cook toghter
keep going and post soon
bye bye

Sob, kill her, please. The evil, spiteful, self absorbed harridan has to DIE! How could she be so mean to poor Max after everything she already put him through. Also, please fix what's going wrong between Grant and Harry.

I love the story plot and the characters you've introduced to this HP universe, but I have to say I dislike that Allie for always being such a bitch to Harry.

I believe you are playing it as if her being preggy is the problem, but I don't ever recall being such a switch myself, or even meeting anyone that could change that drastically. The way I see it we're seeing the true Allie, and she's not a nice person at all. I sincerely hope the others find out the truth soon.

*smiles* This is a really good story, Mistress. I love the way that you capture the feelings of the submissive and the way that you don't make it sound too out there. I hate it when people think that they can write a Dom/sub relationship and then they get so many little things wrong, or twisted around, and they think nothing of it. But, I guess that it helps that you actually are a Domme. I've tried writing things from a submissives point of view before, but I haven't acknowledged myself as one for very long. I've only been open about that for about a year, and I've not been in a relationship since. Also, I'm only 21, so I don't really have that much experience with it, even if I want that changed. *blushes*

But, I just wanted to say that you've done really well with the story, Mistress, and I am loving the interaction so far, even if I do feel sad for Harry. *blushes* I can't wait to read more.

Lia Star

I just have to day this before I even start reading this one. HOLY SHIT! I mean 114 chapters?? I've never read one that went beyond 90. and I mean really. That's increadiblly long and I hope that I have the patience to read each chapter and not just sip over some of them. And the fact that this story has been uploaded for only 6months is really saying something for your dedication and 777 reviews? Wow..Kudoos to you and I'm looking forward to reading this one. It must be a real piece of work.

I love the way you have Davy as a once culinary student. I just pulled myself out of culinary school for another major, so I know the type. And the knife kits are awesome so the fact that you have him usinf one from the classes is totally cool. Please don't stop anytime soon, I love the story and anxiously await the next chapters!

ma'am, i would like to thank you for showing me that there are a lot of good Doms out there. If I wasnt gay i might have asked you to help me find a female Dom(i like pleasing people, and im relatively quiet and (no disrespect. if i have disrespected you then this boy is sorry) submissive unless angered. Btw i just relized that i live in Indiana and you prolly live in WV.

Jason is such a sweet character. I can not wait to see what becomes pf him. I hope his story turns happier in upcomming chapters.

wow this was a wonderful chapter and so long i love it.
keep going and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye