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schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic.
I have comed to chap 82, and cant wait to continue with the rest.
Love it so far. ^_^
Hugglez Draconian_Love
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Burn Baby Burn!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!!! Ain't Karma a bitch for some people...especially when you threaten someone important to two deadly ex-Death Eathers!!!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... so did Lucius set Orion up... why was Orion involved?... Poor Molly. But at least Percy's out of the way now. And he can't get his grubby hands on Harry's baby. :)
person shelagh
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay An update!!!
person Leentjef
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow... I mean, I saw it comming and all... but... Oh, poor Max. And those poor babies... :( I do hope the next chapter gets finished soon. I want to know what's going to happen now...
person KKDuke
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed reading your story. I was thrilled that you finally updated but can fully understand how real life gets in the way of sitting down at the computer and typing out a chapter to a story! I feel for Allie, although I haven't been pregnant yet, I can't help but feel that her hermones are way out of wack. I hope she comes to her senses soon and becomes a mother to both her children and a husband to Max. Then again, as you had mentioned in an earlier chapter, that her family isn't thrilled about the lifestyle she has chosen and maybe something got "through" to her, trying to show her the "light"; then again I wouldn't leave the children behind, but Allie isn't the most stable person in the world at the moment. I was also shocked that Harry was meeting wtih a doctor (although I can honestly say I might have missed something somewhere) without Severus giving her the 3rd degree to make sure it was okay. I thought, until this chapter, it should have been Grant but as it was mentioned before he's too close to the situation. I am interested in seeing more Damon in the father role to Severus. Maybe after a visit with Orion? Severus has some issues as well to work out and I interested to see how the next meeting with his father goes. Your story has provided an eye opener to me into the M/S world and I find what your writing could actually happen within the characters that JK Rowling has created.

In closing, I hope that Harry has his baby at home alone with Severus and no one else at the home. Maybe an unexpected blizzard could happen! It's West Virginia and mountains, it could happen! I also hope the relationships between Snape, Harry, Grant, Damon, Max, and Allie (I would like Allie to be at least happy and sane) works out well for everyone. I also hope Snape is able to get past what Orion has done to him and Orion gets what he deserves, what ever that may be. I hope that Snape and Harry are able to forgive and understand why Albus acted like a prat to them so that they can all live happily ever after.

Update soon! Thanks.
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you for a new chapter!
It's been 115 chapters and I still get super-excited every time there's a new chapter. What's gonna happen with Max and Allie? I want to know, please, please, please!
Keep up the awesome work!
person mokito
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your wonderful story!!!!! It's one of the best out there, in fact it's on my top 5 list!

And I'm really glad, that Allie and Max split up, but poor Max is so depressed! I hope he gets better soon! Please let him find a nice guy, someone Davy-like, I think those two would have been good together, too!!

And I'm so happy Allie is going to leave, never liked her much anyway! Way too bitchy!

I really hope for Max that he gets better and forgets Allie, the bitch, ASAP and finds himself a guy next, I don't much like reading Het between all that wonderful Slash! lol


well, great work as usual!! *waiting for the new chappie*
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CH. 115 - Well, let us hope Harry does not start playing the 'I'm tired and pregnant' card, having learned it from Allie. Damon and Severus need to get the mother-in-law problem handled quickly before it turns to petty bickering! And Grant needs to find a hobby that does not include hovering over family! As to the nearly gone bitch of a daughter-in-law, all I can say is good riddance - Max will be much better off.