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No offence but who the hell is William Weasley?? I've never heard of him. But the story's progressing well, though I'd love to see a bit more happening in each chapter and that means longer chapters. Keep writing, it's an intersting story.

can't wait to the next chapter

its good really good for the ones ive read on this site most of the one of fanfiction are mostly all the same the really good ones are The Mathias Prophecys

Hi
I have been reading your story over the past couple of days. I can honestly say I have laughed and cried along with all the gang in Echo. I noticed you started writing this puppy way back in 2005 . I take my hat of to you .
Reading the last few chapters I was surprised what went on between Max and Allie. I really felt for her before she gave birth . She seemed really at the end of her rope with the whole pregnancy. I really hope its a bad case of baby blues.It seemed that she did care for her daughter and husband. I know you made her a bitch for a reason but I do feel for Allie . You tell us shes been used and abused in the past . It seems she came out of it swinging at everyone and anyone fighting what has been done to her .okay with all the wrong people. What is it they say . We hurt the ones we love. Thats how I see her . I hope she turns up again and she and Max get back togeather in the end .
The sud dom relationships are ticking all my boxes. There seems to be real relationships between everyone. Please could we have the doms mess up a bit more now and again . Sev can't be in the right all the time can he. I look forward to reading the rest of the story .
I am trying to write a story with a sub dom relationships. Your story has given me alot to think about. Its not set in the HP world though.
Thank you for the story so far

Oh no. Harry is turning into an Alley! Someone smack that boy's bottom!

CH. 117 - Oh dear. Harry has gone 'round the bend now. This entire visit to England will not turn out well. No. Not at all. Things are not looking good one bit. Oh my goodness.

Very very very good chapter and i find it very low from harry
i hope they will find grant and get him to the burrow.
keep writing and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye

GRRRRR....that boy is lucky he's pregnant... *hands Sev the flogger for after Harry delivers*

God Harry has an attitude, I was never that bad when I was pregnant. I have followed this story from the begining and have reread it twice, hope you can update sooner rather than latter, but I will just sit back and wait like I always do.

Oh someone please spank both Harry and Grant for being silly!!!!I hope Hermione or Ron finds Grant pretty quickly and sets things straight. Allie needs more than a spankiing, maybe a full round of medication.
I wonder if Sev's father will take it upon himself to contact Sev now. I hope Harry can stay clear of him while he is in England.